Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the two-lined poem contest. The text is a great size. I like the text centered. Your text is not balanced well in the poem box. Drop the first line down one space and it will be. Your message is stated with clarity. Yes, indeed it's a blessing to have one's memory so many do not. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023

Thanks, I will edit.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 14-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I admire your poem. I look back and remember things I didn't do. I wish I could look back like this. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023

Thanks for reading and the encouraging feedback.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There are many good things about living a long time as long as we keep our faculties and remain mobile, we have to try even harder in old age to keep going and those who remain courageous mange to battle on. Losing one's memory is of course another ball game entirely, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023

Could not agree more. Thanks for the read and the feedback. x back.