Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading.

Yes to Light my Way. (comma after 'yes')

So I can be Far, Far, Above. (comma after 'so')

God I'm still so darned Lost. (comma after 'God')

Where ever are he are? (Wherever & this sentence doesn't make sense, maybe 'Wherever he is??)

So God between you and me? (comma after 'so')

Yes of my now Broken of Heart. (comma after 'yes')

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for visiting and stopping by my dear Barbara and have a blessed week.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

I felt the desperation at the beginning, to be anywhere but here... Moon, Mars, Saturn. By the end of this poignant journey, the tone had changed to pure vacuums heartache. Moving

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023

Yes I do believe the editor's notes explains it all and thanks for stopping by Nikki.
Doctor Ricky1024