A Fathers Grieving Heartache.
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "A Father's Worst Nightmare "My loss of my only son Jason.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a heartfelt write Ricky and I am sorry you feel dead inside because of grief and loss. We suffer from these losses and the pain never really goes away even when time passes. This is a powerful write and I am sorry you relive this trauma, you are in our prayers here on Fanstory, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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This is a heartfelt write Ricky and I am sorry you feel dead inside because of grief and loss. We suffer from these losses and the pain never really goes away even when time passes. This is a powerful write and I am sorry you relive this trauma, you are in our prayers here on Fanstory, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thanks Dolly.
Well, I first started journaling about 2 weeks after the accident.
,( April 14th 2003)
A couple years later.
I wound up competing with the International Society of Poetry in Washington DC.
And, the following year later in 2006.
Again competed but this time at the Riviera Hotel in Las Vegas.
Both events were featured on HBO.
Winning trophies both times.
Many books later, I started getting recognized especially on my Yahoo and Facebook sites with my poetry.
I was recognized first by Number Three Covington Who's Who.
Your pestoring me for 3 months I joined.
And then followed a couple years later with Number two Strathmore's Who's Who.
I turn down Number One Marquee Who's who about 6 months ago.
They wanted to promote me on sites I had already used but wanted $700 to join and would put my name in the "Library of Congress"
And I said I'm too busy.
I'm going after a Pulitzer prize.
When my writing career hopefully is launched on a major network real soon, I will flood the market with over 1,000 written books by the year 2024.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Lea Tonin1
You are right and it's just amazing you are No doubt an extremely talented writer and I was enjoy what you've given. You have bright and vibrant characters that are believable that engaged you right away. I can find no issues grammatically speaking or aesthetically speaking. That's hard to critique something as good as yours.
I wish you all the best and looking forward to your next submission. Always enjoyable have a great evening!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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You are right and it's just amazing you are No doubt an extremely talented writer and I was enjoy what you've given. You have bright and vibrant characters that are believable that engaged you right away. I can find no issues grammatically speaking or aesthetically speaking. That's hard to critique something as good as yours.
I wish you all the best and looking forward to your next submission. Always enjoyable have a great evening!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Always appreciate you and I will continue to educate.
Not just Fanstory but the World.
All in my son's name!
Doctor Ricky
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Excellent!