Song Bird
8 word poetry competition8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the 8-word contest. The text is a great size, and I like it being centered. The message is stated with clarity, and it is easy to understand. It's a short poem just in time for the beginning of spring. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry to the 8-word contest. The text is a great size, and I like it being centered. The message is stated with clarity, and it is easy to understand. It's a short poem just in time for the beginning of spring. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Comment from Bill Schott
This eight-word poem, Song Bird, has the proper formatting and pictures the bough, the bird, and the chirpity chirp of the wee warbler on the swaying branch.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This eight-word poem, Song Bird, has the proper formatting and pictures the bough, the bird, and the chirpity chirp of the wee warbler on the swaying branch.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
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Comment from PoemsOfDD
I like this eight word contest entry. Who doesn't like to listen to the soothing sound of bird song?
However, without putting a gender on a sweetly singing bird, perhaps ... wind carries each song - can be an option to consider. Best of luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I like this eight word contest entry. Who doesn't like to listen to the soothing sound of bird song?
However, without putting a gender on a sweetly singing bird, perhaps ... wind carries each song - can be an option to consider. Best of luck with the competition.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good word count.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good word count.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love birds song and they rise early outside my window in England in the summer, sometimes before 4am, the sound is soothing at that time in the morning, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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I love birds song and they rise early outside my window in England in the summer, sometimes before 4am, the sound is soothing at that time in the morning, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
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Comment from JT traveller
A lovely poem with an apt illustration to complement your words. They are appear to be in synergy, the wind causing the tree branch to sway while carrying away the bird's song. A clever write. Best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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A lovely poem with an apt illustration to complement your words. They are appear to be in synergy, the wind causing the tree branch to sway while carrying away the bird's song. A clever write. Best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You have a nice picture with a poem that tells a story in very few words. A gentle wind does carry birdsong far from his nearby neighbors. Best of luck in the eight-word poetry contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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You have a nice picture with a poem that tells a story in very few words. A gentle wind does carry birdsong far from his nearby neighbors. Best of luck in the eight-word poetry contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very nice poem and so few words nice to know update and comforting and gives me a smile all at the same time.
Picture is nice and suits what you're writing about. Person that could feel himself well done your mission is accomplished!
The only thing I would request would be to make the font a little Fit bigger so older people couldn't read it other Then that it's a lovely poem that's a fine addition to this contract I hope you have a great afternoon!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Very nice poem and so few words nice to know update and comforting and gives me a smile all at the same time.
Picture is nice and suits what you're writing about. Person that could feel himself well done your mission is accomplished!
The only thing I would request would be to make the font a little Fit bigger so older people couldn't read it other Then that it's a lovely poem that's a fine addition to this contract I hope you have a great afternoon!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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