Fatigue
World weariness7 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the 8-word contest. The text is an okay size. It could be one size larger. The message is stated with clarity, and it is one I can relate to. If honest, most could relate to times their faith is tested. A visual would enhance your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry to the 8-word contest. The text is an okay size. It could be one size larger. The message is stated with clarity, and it is one I can relate to. If honest, most could relate to times their faith is tested. A visual would enhance your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a strong entry for the eight words contest. In few words you have expressed a statement that many can relate to. We are all but human. I like this.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This is a strong entry for the eight words contest. In few words you have expressed a statement that many can relate to. We are all but human. I like this.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good word count.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good word count.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are sometimes tired of hearing the same old stories when we turn on the news and we grow exhausted and our prayers abandon us, this is what has happened here I expect, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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We are sometimes tired of hearing the same old stories when we turn on the news and we grow exhausted and our prayers abandon us, this is what has happened here I expect, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Kaiku
that`s very sad. Don`t really know how to provide a response that satisfies the requested 150 characters so might I ramble. When you can`t find a pulse, better start praying!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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that`s very sad. Don`t really know how to provide a response that satisfies the requested 150 characters so might I ramble. When you can`t find a pulse, better start praying!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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That is very good advice.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good title and presentation.
-You have used your 8 words well with a good topic.
-Effective repetition of the 'h' sound.
-You have a good message showing that
certain situations make it harder to pray.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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-A good title and presentation.
-You have used your 8 words well with a good topic.
-Effective repetition of the 'h' sound.
-You have a good message showing that
certain situations make it harder to pray.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This eight-word poem, Fatigue, has the proper formatting and suggests that the world has tipped to the degree that the praying people are reaching the point of exhaustion.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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This eight-word poem, Fatigue, has the proper formatting and suggests that the world has tipped to the degree that the praying people are reaching the point of exhaustion.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Bill.