Walking with Christ
Have faith in the Lord.14 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the 8-word contest. The text is a great size, and I like it being centered. The message is stated with clarity, and it is easy to understand. Having faith is needed when trying to live a Christian life. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry to the 8-word contest. The text is a great size, and I like it being centered. The message is stated with clarity, and it is easy to understand. Having faith is needed when trying to live a Christian life. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your insightful review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the eight word poem contest. I like that it includes rhyme in such a small space and the spiritual message is strong. Well done and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry for the eight word poem contest. I like that it includes rhyme in such a small space and the spiritual message is strong. Well done and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your review and encouraging words.
Comment from jaded831
I have deep faith, buy lately have forgotten to pray with my heart, your poem reminded me to speak to Jesus with my heart. He heals all wounds and I need Him right now. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I have deep faith, buy lately have forgotten to pray with my heart, your poem reminded me to speak to Jesus with my heart. He heals all wounds and I need Him right now. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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With God, there is a reason for everything. I truly believe I wrote this poem for you. Jesus hears your heart. He's reaching out to you right now. Bless you. I love your poetry! I love its simplicity and depth. Each word is rich with meaning. I so much appreciate your review, especially the sixth star. Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good word count.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good word count.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent challenge for each of us to live and walk by faith. I don't quite agree with "Don't think", but certainly don't overthink, as He gives us brains and wisdom, but faith is to override these. But I know what you mean, and it's a good message. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Excellent challenge for each of us to live and walk by faith. I don't quite agree with "Don't think", but certainly don't overthink, as He gives us brains and wisdom, but faith is to override these. But I know what you mean, and it's a good message. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine faithful and uplifting write and I love the picture too. There are times when we need this kind of support so that we don't sink, I enjoyed your post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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A fine faithful and uplifting write and I love the picture too. There are times when we need this kind of support so that we don't sink, I enjoyed your post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from JT traveller
You clearly are of strong faith. Your chosen illustration is the perfect accompaniment to your words. It is hard to write poetry in just eight words. I find most of these works sound more like messages or statements. Best of luck. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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You clearly are of strong faith. Your chosen illustration is the perfect accompaniment to your words. It is hard to write poetry in just eight words. I find most of these works sound more like messages or statements. Best of luck. Jacqueline
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from LisaMay
Your 8-word poem very effectively uses rhyme to impart its message of supportive faith.
I do wonder why you have capital letters for 'Think and 'Hand', as I feel they are unnecessary in this context.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Your 8-word poem very effectively uses rhyme to impart its message of supportive faith.
I do wonder why you have capital letters for 'Think and 'Hand', as I feel they are unnecessary in this context.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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A very astute and correct observation. I've made the corrections. Thanks you so much for your review and constructive comments.
Comment from jmdg1954
It's all about believing. With a belief in our Lord, nearly anything is possible.
Your photo went well with your poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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It's all about believing. With a belief in our Lord, nearly anything is possible.
Your photo went well with your poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
The best thing one can do in this life is to grasp the hand of Jesus, our elder brother by some years, the safest place to be is at His side, a beautifully written entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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The best thing one can do in this life is to grasp the hand of Jesus, our elder brother by some years, the safest place to be is at His side, a beautifully written entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your review. As you say, there is no safer place than beside our Lord. Your comments are much appreciated
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Well done