Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry to the 8-word contest. The text is a great size, and I like it being centered. The message is stated with clarity, and it is easy to understand. It's a short poem that most have asked after the death of a loved one. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023

Thanks for the read and the positive feedback. Appreciated.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 13-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

Yes concise and to the point in this very short format of a mere eight words- but sufficient to convey the pain of loss and loneliness when a beloved is gone

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thank you for your read and encouraging review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You have used your 8 words well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and repetition of the 'h' sound,
and the use of 'shattered.'
-You establish the premise and ask a good question,
showing how the loss of a loved one impacts on a person.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thank you for the exacting review. I always appreciate your diligence and feedback.

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Mar-2023

You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent eight word poem for the contest
with a perfect picture to match.
Many on fanstory will relate to the theme.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated.