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My loss of my only son Jason.
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Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this well written post with us. Yes, it was a tragedy but good came from it in the form of organ donation. I can't say I enjoyed reading because of the subject matter, but it was a good write.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
Why? Thanks Barbara for stopping by again. I appreciate your comments here and review!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
Lea Tonin1
Oh that's kind of a sad. However its beautifully written Pull up heart ache pain regret things you can't erase but can only move on from. Your phone speaks to me with all of that a time transition that's on the pain and a time of growth whether we want to or not. Could make no changes to something that's already great. It is getting difficult out there and especially with your writing to protect or define suggestions for change. However I shall keep looking l o l. Have a great night!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
It's always a pleasure Lea.
It's raining now in South Jersey.
I posted once today. I will post once more.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
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