Comment from
Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 12 words poetry contest. The text could be one size larger under the big visual. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. Congratulations on a loving 40-year relationship. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 11-Mar-2023
Comment from
prettybluebirds
Your poem says a lot in so few words. I love the artwork you attached to the writing. It adds even more meaning to the words you have written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023