Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao suggaray,

This is a very sensual poem . When two hearts beat as one there is no need for words.

Limbs are entwined, his warm, wet, lips tasting her sweetness, her soft whimpers and moans spur him on to explore each curve and nook.

Okay , I think you got the picture your poem planted in my mind (wink)

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you for wonderful review, Franca. I can see that you fully understand my short verse. :)

Melissa

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job, Melissa. Your 12 words were
well thought out and so meaningful and true. The
picture paired perfectly with them. I agreed with your
message. When 2 are truly in love, there is a deep
understanding between them where words aren't always needed.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023

Thanks so much, Jan!!

Melissa

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

A beautiful black and white photo to enhance this well written entry for the 12 word contest. Love has no bounds and, over time, no words are necessary. I like this reflective short piece. Well done and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 12 Word Poetry Contest. Very romantic.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.. Good word count.

Goodluck

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This poem in twelve words was very beautiful. It brought back memories of when I had love and before it all went away. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

How true and you expressed great emotion in this write and I felt the love here, a fine presentation, good luck with the contest, a fine post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A different kind of love, true love is selfless, it brings great joy to others without thought of benefit to self, it brings fulfilment of purpose, a beautifully written post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!

reply by royowen on 11-Mar-2023

Welcome

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Yes, indeed, a story in and of itself in this wee poem, begging for more romance. Prose perhaps? I enjoyed this very much. Here's wishing you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much, Dawn.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a beautifully stated entry to the 12-word contest. The text is a good size. I like your formation of the text. The message is focused and clearly stated. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thank you Sandra!

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 11-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Melissa,
This short poem is so true. In true love words are not needed but are still liked. I think have love as the middle of your poem reminds us the love is the center of any happy fulfilled life.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much Joan!!

reply by dragonpoet on 11-Mar-2023

You are most kindly welcome.
Joan