Tanka Collection
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem - Excellent picture presentation - motion picture too wow. Pretty soon maybe we will have sound too? Modern times so amazing. Poem telling to a sad young lady sadly watching the rain fall recalling her boyfriend - reminded of him on grayish rainy days - hope spring comes soon - terrible wast of time for a young person. Love
Good Job AP
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I like your Tanka poem - Excellent picture presentation - motion picture too wow. Pretty soon maybe we will have sound too? Modern times so amazing. Poem telling to a sad young lady sadly watching the rain fall recalling her boyfriend - reminded of him on grayish rainy days - hope spring comes soon - terrible wast of time for a young person. Love
Good Job AP
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were awesome. The torrid rain in the last picture was perfect for your words and the first picture were fantastic of the young girl with the umbrella sitting on the front porch. It was great. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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What a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were awesome. The torrid rain in the last picture was perfect for your words and the first picture were fantastic of the young girl with the umbrella sitting on the front porch. It was great. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Gray, raining days do make us think of times that aren't necessarily good, example a lost loved more. One again you presented a complete package with the artwork to set the more and the words that enhance it.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Gray, raining days do make us think of times that aren't necessarily good, example a lost loved more. One again you presented a complete package with the artwork to set the more and the words that enhance it.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, what is it that grey rainy days makes us feel so somber.
Your poem is filled with good sensory appeal. Of special note:
Let the pain be washed away.
(Amen)
Well chosen photo. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Hi Gypsy, what is it that grey rainy days makes us feel so somber.
Your poem is filled with good sensory appeal. Of special note:
Let the pain be washed away.
(Amen)
Well chosen photo. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, when past relationships fade or we do lose love we do feel down for quite some time, but thankfully young hearts can heal, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Excellent, when past relationships fade or we do lose love we do feel down for quite some time, but thankfully young hearts can heal, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You did an excellent job of using words to paint a dismal setting and to tell a story of past happiness with a sad ending--to be washed away with the rain.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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You did an excellent job of using words to paint a dismal setting and to tell a story of past happiness with a sad ending--to be washed away with the rain.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's so sad to mourn the loss of the beloved one and relationship with all those days shared. But the good thing about the rain and the tears is that the pain can be "washed away."
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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That's so sad to mourn the loss of the beloved one and relationship with all those days shared. But the good thing about the rain and the tears is that the pain can be "washed away."
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you big sister.
It's raining in pasadena. Tomorrow, micaela, Atticus, and nick are going to Sacramento. The funeral is not until next Friday so they will be gone for 9 days. I'm going to miss them.
Love you, have a wonderful weekend.
Marival ❤️
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It's going to be so quiet there! I guess you will be writing a lot more! 💖
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It's super quiet. I miss my little tornado. LoL
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I can imagine! It's a big difference for you!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and a rainy, gloomy day makes me think how much I hate rainy, gloomy days and how I wish I I had a mug of coffee. Come to think of it, everything makes me think of having coffee!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and a rainy, gloomy day makes me think how much I hate rainy, gloomy days and how I wish I I had a mug of coffee. Come to think of it, everything makes me think of having coffee!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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LoL Thank you, Mike. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Thoughts of a past relationship become more acute in poor weather as we hope the pain subsides and the sun brings some release, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thoughts of a past relationship become more acute in poor weather as we hope the pain subsides and the sun brings some release, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Dolly,
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, you are very kind.
Gypsy