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Royal Flush

12 words

9 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This twelve-word poem, Royal Flush, has the proper formatting and makes the best hands seem like trash as they are no longer so. ................................

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

Comment from PoemsOfDD
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This is a good entry for the 12 word poem contest. I like the photo and the rhymed message when playing a game of cards. Poker players know all about the obscene change of direction a hand can take. Well done and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 12 Word Poetry Contest

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.. Good word count.

Goodluck

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a well-stated entry to the 12-word contest. The text is a good size. The message is focused and clearly stated. Wow! you even managed to make it a rhyming poem. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

Comment from JT traveller
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Your poem speaks loudly and cleary to me. As one who had played five card stud and poker on a number of occasions I can imagine the outrage when you took the pot. Haha. Congratulations. A vivid, well composed poem.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

Comment from RodG
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I can only imagine what the scene would be like at a major casino's poker room if a player won a huge pot with a royal flush. I, personally, have never had one. Rod

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
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A five card royal flush is a rare thing to see. And it pays very well, indeed. But did you know there once was (and still is in some foreign decks), a fourth face card called the Cavalier or Knight?

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

Comment from Earl Corp
Exceptional
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Anybody who can write a twelve-word poem and make it rhyme and make sense deserves both a six-star rating and my vote. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

Comment from royowen
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I'm not absolutely certain what this is about, but the brilliant ambiguity gives it some sort of zest and imagination, so I find that's deliciously intriguing, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Supposed to be how players behave at poker,especially when they're cleaned out. Sorry you didn't get it
reply by royowen on 10-Mar-2023
    Sorry about that, I said it was ambiguous,