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The Pathway to Pain and Misery

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm pretty sure some of the errors were on purpose to show ignorance, but others need to be fixed.

Well you need to realize your Honor every time I tries to gets an attorney? (Comma after 'Well' & 'get')

Yup Your Honers. (Honor)

You see Judge? (comma after 'see')

Now dont you Miss Reel? (don't & comma after 'you')
What's day Judge Judy? (doesn't make sense)

And, why your trying to trap the defendant into some
(you're)

form of "Hippopotamus African Shot Gun Wedding?Yes (space after the question mark)

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
    Thanks again Barbra for stopping by..
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile with the court case between these water pigs and you made it all sound so real, I enjoyed this fun fantasy post Ricky, much love, Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Last Monday I have superior court at Toms River at the justice complex for 8 hours.
    This is all completely true and you won't see after the third part is done!
    Thanks Dolly,
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Yet another very challenged right on your behalf interesting. How you have the water pig and judge Judy I like it! Your writing always is and engaging to read. A picture is pretty cool too back in ancient Egypt. Then I was filled with water buffalo or water pigs and or Hippopotamus in the Nile back in the old days Thousands of years ago they were hunted to extinction in the Egyptian part of the Nile not sure if it was Egyptians completely or just them in part. However it happened. I quite enjoy your writing and I look forward to seeing more. I find no issues with your work or spelling or grammar or anything. it's all good as far as I can tell. I look forward to your next submission have a great night!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    This is all completely true, but I'm adding some fictional thoughts to bring it forward and make it funny!
    Thanks Lea and I hope I am entertaining You?
    Question?
    Is the origin of a unicorn Is it based on the fact that white that white people had seen? Rhinoceros and thought it was a unicorn?
    So the symbol of the horn on the rhinoceros led to a unicorn which is actually a horse with a horn.
    The rhinoceros is a symbol on the British flag.
    Represents strength and power.
    And, a symbol of Jesus.


    All right so let me
    Doctor Ricky
reply by Lea Tonin1 on 10-Mar-2023
    Huh that is an interesting factoid I can add to my repertoire of facts. Yes i'm quite entertained by the things that you write and they're so diverse what i'm reading keep it up! Always happy to see more! Do you know what 1 ocean said to the other? Nothing they just waved.....lol