Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

What a gorgeous poem very talented and insightful write!

"Troubled notes play out in Grief and unholy pains" my favorite line!
I can't find any issues with the way it's written or your subject matter or grammatical issues at all. I think it's very well done and worthy of top notch marks.
As people unable to remember the other side, the always an ancient question we ask is "why" for myself I must forget the why and ask who what where when and how. This keeps me in the now rather than in the past.
Love your palm and look forward to reading more have a great night!!

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Thanks Lea.
I had a lot of fun writing this cuz I got pretty deep and I love my words selections!
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine write about the transition from Autumn to Winter and I felt the chill in the air and the flowers dying as the frost chills and it is a metaphor for grief and sorrow, a clever use of words and your emotions and passion are evident here Ricky, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Well if I can make you feel for my work that's a great honor for me. Miss Dolly!
Thanks for reviewing and have a Blessed day!
Doctor Ricky

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Pensive thoughts to start the day. Creatively expressed words that display a great depth of feeling. A wonderful piece of writing Ricky. Thank you for sharing. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

I think you ever so much Jacqueline for enjoying this as much as I loved writing it!
Doctor Ricky

reply by JT traveller on 10-Mar-2023

My pleasure Rickiy. Jacqueline 😊

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023