Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

A few weeks before this shooting there was a University of Michigan protesters call for 'Intifada,' demise of Israel: 'A call to murder Jews'. I am wondering if there is any connection between the two. I am not saying either was right, but just curious.

Now, your doing fine young man (you're)

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

I googled the shooters last name and it's Irish so I adapted it has anything to do with what you were posting. Barbara.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Julie Lau

Good

Disturbing, charged and affective. Your obvious emotion pardons some spelling errors, but here they are if you wish to correct them:
(1) 'you are' abbreviated becomes you're, not your, (2) typo in 'weapon'.
I wish you all the best and hope that your society will eventually work past these very violent times. Julie

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Thanks for your review and I noted the typos. Miss Julie.
Doctor Ricky I'll try

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Excellent

The voice here is very convincingly built up! It sounds tempting and the argument is all too appealing. Check 'you're' rather than 'your' and spelling of 'divine' and 'weapon'.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023

Thanks for reviewing. I caught two out of the three grammar issues.
Doctor Ricky buying the spelled

reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 09-Mar-2023

Best wishes!