Earth the Beautiful
What God gives us41 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-I agree with your notes.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You create a vivid word picture of the scenes in nature.
-You also create a peaceful mood with images like
"cotton white clouds" and "soft waves" reaching the beach.
-A very good concluding verse with good reference
referring back to beauty reaching the eye and
"the blue of the sky.
-Well done!!
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-I agree with your notes.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You create a vivid word picture of the scenes in nature.
-You also create a peaceful mood with images like
"cotton white clouds" and "soft waves" reaching the beach.
-A very good concluding verse with good reference
referring back to beauty reaching the eye and
"the blue of the sky.
-Well done!!
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very nice poem about the beauty of nature all around us. You nailed the need for us all to do all we can to preserve the nature all around us very evocative
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very nice poem about the beauty of nature all around us. You nailed the need for us all to do all we can to preserve the nature all around us very evocative
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from royowen
I don't think people want to destroy it, it's just that they want other things more. They cannot forsake the expedient things, and I think that we can't exclude ourselves, I want to destroy the earth either, but we consume the very things that do, beautifully written Willie, well done, blessings Roy
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I don't think people want to destroy it, it's just that they want other things more. They cannot forsake the expedient things, and I think that we can't exclude ourselves, I want to destroy the earth either, but we consume the very things that do, beautifully written Willie, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Willie,
This is a great nature poem. In literature and in life the sun is extremely important: it brings light and growth to our planet.
Excellent poem, Willie.
Good luck!
Cindy
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Willie,
This is a great nature poem. In literature and in life the sun is extremely important: it brings light and growth to our planet.
Excellent poem, Willie.
Good luck!
Cindy
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Willie
This poem flows like the day into the night. Your words remind us of all the beauty we sometimes miss if we don't pay attention.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
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Hi Willie
This poem flows like the day into the night. Your words remind us of all the beauty we sometimes miss if we don't pay attention.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from nomi338
You are blessed to be an eye witness the beauty and majesty of one of God's creative master pieces. Man may be his crowning glory, but the other creations are not far behind.
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You are blessed to be an eye witness the beauty and majesty of one of God's creative master pieces. Man may be his crowning glory, but the other creations are not far behind.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I'm with you, we should treat mother earth better.
I like your word imagery. You use two senses--see and hear. Nicely done. Excellent presentation.
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I'm with you, we should treat mother earth better.
I like your word imagery. You use two senses--see and hear. Nicely done. Excellent presentation.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Willie... This is a lovely verse that amplifies your love of Nature and all things beautiful. The use of the words 'I see" really enhances this poem and gives it an personal and intimate quality. Very nice and. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
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Hello Willie... This is a lovely verse that amplifies your love of Nature and all things beautiful. The use of the words 'I see" really enhances this poem and gives it an personal and intimate quality. Very nice and. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about God's beautiful earth. I love poems like this. You used great descriptive words and lovely art work. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about God's beautiful earth. I love poems like this. You used great descriptive words and lovely art work. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem it has a great flow and rhyme scheme. I absolute love your photo it's so breathtaking. So pretty. Such beautiful vibrant colours.
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This is a beautifully written poem it has a great flow and rhyme scheme. I absolute love your photo it's so breathtaking. So pretty. Such beautiful vibrant colours.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
