loneliness
monoku: 1-line poem of 17 syllables3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
This Monoku - not familiar with the format - speaks volumes about Time and the sense of loneliness we may feel - the title is a useful guide - and a superb pic -has my vote
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This Monoku - not familiar with the format - speaks volumes about Time and the sense of loneliness we may feel - the title is a useful guide - and a superb pic -has my vote
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you Zanya for your comments, the high rating, and your vote. I appreciate you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think the only time seems to linger is when we are lonely and suddenly the clock slows down. I live alone and I am never lonely as my days are so busy and the time seems to whizz by. Perhaps I should take a few moments to relax and slow time, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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I think the only time seems to linger is when we are lonely and suddenly the clock slows down. I live alone and I am never lonely as my days are so busy and the time seems to whizz by. Perhaps I should take a few moments to relax and slow time, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the Monokus contest
with good syllable count and an excellent theme.
Loneliness and boredom seem to make time slow.
Great choice of art work too.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This is an excellent entry for the Monokus contest
with good syllable count and an excellent theme.
Loneliness and boredom seem to make time slow.
Great choice of art work too.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thanks for your review. There's no excuse for people to be bored but being lonely can carry a huge weight.
