The Flame
Mister Right!2 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
You have vivid imagery in your words that brings forth feelings and emotions. A feeling of romance is also found in your poetic form. Excellent two line poem that says much.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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You have vivid imagery in your words that brings forth feelings and emotions. A feeling of romance is also found in your poetic form. Excellent two line poem that says much.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from JT traveller
Powerful words, full of emotion and energy. Utilisation of the senses bring your poem to life. A small suggestion. The colour selection of purple on red makes your poem very difficult to read. Jacqueline
P.S. Much improved. Great minds think alike, fools seldom differ. Which are we? ð???ð??? Jacqueline
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Powerful words, full of emotion and energy. Utilisation of the senses bring your poem to life. A small suggestion. The colour selection of purple on red makes your poem very difficult to read. Jacqueline
P.S. Much improved. Great minds think alike, fools seldom differ. Which are we? ð???ð??? Jacqueline
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Too funny. I just switched it as you were probably writing this. Can you take one more peek and tell me what you think?
