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Crossing My Mind

One does not have to be a lover to be inspiring

3 total reviews 
Comment from damommy
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Sometimes, someone enters our life for a short while, and their memory stays with us forever. This is one of those magic times. Remembering will always bring a smile to your face, and in your heart.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Yes, indeed! You got the total intent this poem meant to convey.

    and with you I have not met you in person but chats I have with you are always welcome.
reply by damommy on 09-Mar-2023
    I enjoy them, too.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Crossing My Mind, reminds the readers that there are those who come into our lives, perhaps only once, but leave a great impression...............................................

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Thank you so very much.
Comment from J Mosk
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While some good imagery and strong sentiment behind the words, I feel this poem to be quite maudlin and juvenile at parts.
You carried a great rhythm throughout and you are a natural with structure, and a very talented writer pops up here and there throughout the verse.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much. I am trying to get back to writing after a forced hiatus

    Some thoughts crossed my mind this morning and I decided to act upon it!