Ancient Art of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Break"A compilation of poems
7 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An expression here of deep sadness and bitterness through inexcusable falsehoods professing love. Your image and sentiments stir the reader. Good luck in this 5-7-5 well counted verse. Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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An expression here of deep sadness and bitterness through inexcusable falsehoods professing love. Your image and sentiments stir the reader. Good luck in this 5-7-5 well counted verse. Debbie
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you Debbie so much for your kind review! I'm always happy to hear from you! Your insight is as usual spot on! I appreciate how you approach things in your review giving glimpses into your thoughts. This above anything is validation to the writer. Thank you for that I appreciate it very much and for your fine rating. I hope your day is grand!
Comment from Theresa Honnigford
Amazing! Great imagery. Well chosen. This is powerful and well written. Syllable count looks accurate. Wonderful. Title fits well also.
Thanks, Theresa H.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Amazing! Great imagery. Well chosen. This is powerful and well written. Syllable count looks accurate. Wonderful. Title fits well also.
Thanks, Theresa H.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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I'm really glad you like this. Thank you so much for your fine rating and your kind comments I am truly humbled! I appreciate your insight as well and your love of art!
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Welcome 😊
Comment from Lisasview
Fabulous image!! Makes one want to read your words... and, your words are so sad...there is a lot of pain there.
It is heartbreaking that so many go through such sad times.
Lisa, new to this site
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Fabulous image!! Makes one want to read your words... and, your words are so sad...there is a lot of pain there.
It is heartbreaking that so many go through such sad times.
Lisa, new to this site
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you Lisa! I appreciate your kind words and your review and welcome to fan story. I look forward to seeing you on this site. Thank you again for your time and for your insight I hope you have a grand day!
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Hi Lea,
You are most welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
No one appreciates false and fake affection Lea, your words are indeed profound here, I wish you luck with the contest, a fine presentation, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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No one appreciates false and fake affection Lea, your words are indeed profound here, I wish you luck with the contest, a fine presentation, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you Dolly I appreciate your words and your insight! Yes I'm not very successful in the ways of love or in the people. I picked and chose to help it seems. I picked the wrong ones and perhaps you picked 9 but it's not my nature. I've always tried to help other people. I probably will again but it's the hard ones along the way that really make me question myself. Thank you for your review Dolly and your kind rating. I hope your gaze of great as it can be!
Comment from karenina
Oh, dang. I've spent the afternoon reading ALL of your posts and this is the last of them (up until now)--
It's always a gift to immerse myself in one writer's work.
I get a real feel for where you're coming from, what you are sharing, and what I can expect in the future.
I'm now going to officially "fan" you.
And I will consider myself fortunate to have happened upon your work, while you are still brand new!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Oh, dang. I've spent the afternoon reading ALL of your posts and this is the last of them (up until now)--
It's always a gift to immerse myself in one writer's work.
I get a real feel for where you're coming from, what you are sharing, and what I can expect in the future.
I'm now going to officially "fan" you.
And I will consider myself fortunate to have happened upon your work, while you are still brand new!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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That's so nice of you to say so thank you so much and I too am a fan of you spent much time going over my scribblings and offered much advice and kind words and compassionate insight for which I'm very grateful for and I look forward to reading your work as well and further correspondence. Thank you again have a great evening!
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What a joy to read your work!
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🙃😊ty!
Comment from Sally Law
Powerfully conveyed in short verse 5-7-5 poetry, Lea. I can feel the heartbreak. Beautiful art compliments your fine offering. Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the upcoming vote.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Powerfully conveyed in short verse 5-7-5 poetry, Lea. I can feel the heartbreak. Beautiful art compliments your fine offering. Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the upcoming vote.
Sal :))
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you Sally is always I appreciate your words in your inright. I'll thank you for taking the time to have a look at this and offer your comments. I am grateful and i've already heard that thank you
Comment from JT traveller
Enmity. A very powerful word to complete your poem. Such melancholic words and a fantastic choice of illustration to set them off. Another great write. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Enmity. A very powerful word to complete your poem. Such melancholic words and a fantastic choice of illustration to set them off. Another great write. Jacqueline
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words and I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. For taking the time to look at it and offer your thoughts equally valuable. Thank you so much hope you have a great night!
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My pleasure. 😊
