Off Road
a 5-7-520 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Getting that truck out of the "thick of things" would be similar to taking a break from traffic.
Your sentiment from the poem carries on.
Well done, Bill.
John
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
  |
Getting that truck out of the "thick of things" would be similar to taking a break from traffic.
Your sentiment from the poem carries on.
Well done, Bill.
John
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
-
Thank you, John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This old truck looks well and truly retired but someone might restore it to its former glory as your poem promises here Bill, I enjoyed the sentiment, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
|
This old truck looks well and truly retired but someone might restore it to its former glory as your poem promises here Bill, I enjoyed the sentiment, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
Thanks, Dolly
Comment from lyenochka
That's a fun picture to illustrate this poem. With that classic truck taking a break among the fireweed, I think it should really be relaxed. But I wonder if it will get back on the road?
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
|
That's a fun picture to illustrate this poem. With that classic truck taking a break among the fireweed, I think it should really be relaxed. But I wonder if it will get back on the road?
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
Sometimes a break is just the beginning of broken down.
-
Oh. I thought that was just FORDs...Found on the Road Dead...
-
I used to own a *shove or leave it* also known as a Chevrolet.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Bill,
A fun poem but I hope you have a new beaut state of the art miracle
because I think this vehicle (or shell) may need it.
Well done-I'm still smiling.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
|
Hi Bill,
A fun poem but I hope you have a new beaut state of the art miracle
because I think this vehicle (or shell) may need it.
Well done-I'm still smiling.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
Thank you, Shirley
-
You're welcome
Comment from nomi338
Man oh man, I would love to see that beauty fully restored. I would be so proud to be seen in that. I cannot believe that it was allowed to get in that condition in the first place. That is a classic beauty.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
|
Man oh man, I would love to see that beauty fully restored. I would be so proud to be seen in that. I cannot believe that it was allowed to get in that condition in the first place. That is a classic beauty.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
The lady who took the picture says it's her father's old dairy farm truck.
-
Wow! It is a beauty.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
My husband I love it excellent work! Premium picture too!
This is very Clever with the old truck covered in vines no other vehicles to be seen back on the road soon I very much enjoyed that thank you for the smile!
This is a really good palm and a contender for the win I'm sure.
I can find no issues or anything that needs correctly in your poem and you've adhered greatly to the contest regulations. I'm sure you'll do great have a good evening!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
|
My husband I love it excellent work! Premium picture too!
This is very Clever with the old truck covered in vines no other vehicles to be seen back on the road soon I very much enjoyed that thank you for the smile!
This is a really good palm and a contender for the win I'm sure.
I can find no issues or anything that needs correctly in your poem and you've adhered greatly to the contest regulations. I'm sure you'll do great have a good evening!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
Thank you, Lea
Comment from Gloria ....
Here's for hopeful thinking. This is great good fun, with lots of meaning. Your words and artwork match so perfectly as to create an absolutely smiling moment.
Much enjoyed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
|
Here's for hopeful thinking. This is great good fun, with lots of meaning. Your words and artwork match so perfectly as to create an absolutely smiling moment.
Much enjoyed.
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
Thank you, Gloria
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Bill Lol yes I can see why, and you have let the grass grow around your wheels
Sometime it is like that in a traffic Jam
Or do you mean you are having a rest from FS , hope not I enjoy your posts
A good 5-7-5
Cheers Chris
Cheers
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
|
Hi Bill Lol yes I can see why, and you have let the grass grow around your wheels
Sometime it is like that in a traffic Jam
Or do you mean you are having a rest from FS , hope not I enjoy your posts
A good 5-7-5
Cheers Chris
Cheers
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
Just a poem, Chris. Thanks for giving it a look.
-
Thats good Bill i like it anyway
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love the picture you have chosen and your words say it all. What stories these abandoned vehicles could tell. The vehicle I drive is 20 years old and I wonder if it will someday end up in a field somewhere.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
|
I love the picture you have chosen and your words say it all. What stories these abandoned vehicles could tell. The vehicle I drive is 20 years old and I wonder if it will someday end up in a field somewhere.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
I used to sit in these kinds of cars as a kid, in the city dump. Thanks for looking in, Anne.
-
You are welcome, Bill
Comment from Boogienights
This is delightful. It made me smile and lifted my spirits, I needed that. I think taking a break from traffic sounds awesome, but the need to drive remains. I hope my old van doesn't mind.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
 |
This is delightful. It made me smile and lifted my spirits, I needed that. I think taking a break from traffic sounds awesome, but the need to drive remains. I hope my old van doesn't mind.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
-
Thanks, BN, for giving this a look.
