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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Beautiful and dreamy haiku both in words and presentation. One can picture a young woman gazing at the moon with the reflection in her eyes.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a great day!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Nice idea to mention the Worm Full Moon for your presentation.

The man is lucky to express his feelings to his mate in such s fashion - most romantic.

Mark

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a great day!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your human haiku poem - is this a modern haiku or is their a human haiku too? Interesting - Poem has an excellent picture presentation - worm moon has an interesting meaning - March apparently arouses activity in worms- cool. Good word count and flow..like the rhyming quality - makes poetry flow more smoothly in my opinion - takes out the peak and valleys when read. - very nice Good job. AP

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    It's a human haiku because it deals with nature (sky, moon, ocean, night, waves....) season (winter) and human (woman carried away by grief of losing her man). It's classic haiku. It's about nature, it's about a season, less than 17 syllables, ... it has all the elements of haiku.

    Thank you very much.

    Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr
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What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The moon was indeed full and shone in her eyes. Great job, very well done and greatly enjoyed. Your words were magikal. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
    Aryr

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I will search for the Worm Moon tonight. I am pretty sure the reflection in these old eyes is not what you're describing in this beautiful Haiku. You again, presented us with a perfect package. Thank you.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm sure those "full moon eyes" were beautiful and full of romance. I liked the comparison of the moon to the eyes full of wonder and at the same time it could be the moon reflected in her eyes.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. It's a human haiku that shows the relationship between nature and the human experience. I'm glad you like it.

    Love you
    Marival ❤️
Comment from w.j.debi
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You make me sigh with this verse, and smile, too. You paint such a vivid image with the writing that a picture is not necessary, but you enhance the verse with a breathtaking image for an incredible presentation.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and insightful feedback.

    Gypsy hugs