The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Aspen Grove Murders # 17"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
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Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
'Oh my goodness Sal, it just gets more exciting all the time. Now as they say, the troops have been called in. First of all as I had a feeling, the real detective has arrived. Yes, Sally, the team and their dogs have come to help crack the case.
Even PATIENCE has help with other angels, and soon Fee will no longer have a foot to stand on.. I sure hope Tommy turns out OK, and that his tumors are not back . It sure wouldn't be fair for the newlyweds to start out like that. Fee's planning on making it look like he died when he torches his own grounds and home? This gets more exciting every week or I look forward to Monday every week now as I wait for the new chapter. Another great one Sally, you truly are a great detective. Bravo my friend this is absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to see what comes next. I truly am your biggest fan !.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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'Oh my goodness Sal, it just gets more exciting all the time. Now as they say, the troops have been called in. First of all as I had a feeling, the real detective has arrived. Yes, Sally, the team and their dogs have come to help crack the case.
Even PATIENCE has help with other angels, and soon Fee will no longer have a foot to stand on.. I sure hope Tommy turns out OK, and that his tumors are not back . It sure wouldn't be fair for the newlyweds to start out like that. Fee's planning on making it look like he died when he torches his own grounds and home? This gets more exciting every week or I look forward to Monday every week now as I wait for the new chapter. Another great one Sally, you truly are a great detective. Bravo my friend this is absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to see what comes next. I truly am your biggest fan !.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you, my biggest fan. Mike may differ as he is right up there with you.;)) I am so honored and blessed, Debi dear. Thank you for your kind attention to my writing and for the super duper stars! Sending you my best, and love and blessings always.
BBB XOs
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Good luck tomorrow. I am so excited and PLEASE call me or text and let me know how it goes!!!🙏
Comment from Wendy G
Another chapter, well written, showing the inside workings of an evil mind, and of the Satanic foces guiding it.Yet the angelic beings from God are also present and powerful, and this chapter anticipates a dramatic turn where the eternal conflict between good and evil will again be played out very soon.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Another chapter, well written, showing the inside workings of an evil mind, and of the Satanic foces guiding it.Yet the angelic beings from God are also present and powerful, and this chapter anticipates a dramatic turn where the eternal conflict between good and evil will again be played out very soon.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you enjoyed it all, and the spiritual battle. Sending along my very best to you all. Sally XOs
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, there is going to be a great conflict at the mansion of Fee. I love the prayer of Patience and the response of the eagles. Looking forward to Detective Law's role in the resolution of the crimes. Blessings.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Wow, there is going to be a great conflict at the mansion of Fee. I love the prayer of Patience and the response of the eagles. Looking forward to Detective Law's role in the resolution of the crimes. Blessings.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Dear Carol, thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. It means so much to have you hear and your kind reviews. Thanks again for your support and help. Sending Dear Carol, thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. It means so much to have you here and receive your kind reviews. Thanks again for your support and help. Sending love my very best to you all, Sally.XOs
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Each chapter has new information and more adventures, which is fun to read. Thanks for sharing your book.
Comment from WalkerMan
This chapter is a turning point in the story, as the forces of Good are preparing for surprise action against the forces of Evil responsible for troubles going on in Aspen Grove and elsewhere for many decades.
The day begins beautifully, and Willa agrees to walk with Tommy to the hospital for his brain scan and consultation with Dr. Sizemore. Their happy lives together are just beginning.
In contrast, Fitzgerald Edward Elling (Fee) is plotting to burn down his entire estate in an effort to destroy all evidence that might incriminate him, and shift blame to his escaped son Simon, whom he intends to eliminate along with Gaston Paulette and Candace. Fortunately, he does not know where Candace and Simon are or how well they are guarded. It suits Fee's nature to have considered blaming destruction of his estate on the global warming hoax. When the five staff members do not jump at his cleanup offer, demons Nix and DeeCayed get him to incite enough greed to lure them into whatever trap he had planned for their demise, lest they know something he wants gone.
Yes, recent inflation would have increased the dollar-value of famous Andre Dupree's art, especially because there will be no more. It is no surprise that Captain Riley initially has trouble envisioning her as the renowned Blind Girl detective who had solved so many cold cases relatively quickly.
Angel Patience, aware of Fee's evil plot, prepares herself and a troop of angels in eagle form to halt Fee's efforts and protect his unsuspecting employees (and nearby plants and animals) from harm with the help of her requested rainstorm.
It will be hard for readers to wait for the excitement in the next chapter. Your story is building to a climax beyond any you have yet written.
Superb, beautifully illustrated, and well developed for anticipant effect.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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This chapter is a turning point in the story, as the forces of Good are preparing for surprise action against the forces of Evil responsible for troubles going on in Aspen Grove and elsewhere for many decades.
The day begins beautifully, and Willa agrees to walk with Tommy to the hospital for his brain scan and consultation with Dr. Sizemore. Their happy lives together are just beginning.
In contrast, Fitzgerald Edward Elling (Fee) is plotting to burn down his entire estate in an effort to destroy all evidence that might incriminate him, and shift blame to his escaped son Simon, whom he intends to eliminate along with Gaston Paulette and Candace. Fortunately, he does not know where Candace and Simon are or how well they are guarded. It suits Fee's nature to have considered blaming destruction of his estate on the global warming hoax. When the five staff members do not jump at his cleanup offer, demons Nix and DeeCayed get him to incite enough greed to lure them into whatever trap he had planned for their demise, lest they know something he wants gone.
Yes, recent inflation would have increased the dollar-value of famous Andre Dupree's art, especially because there will be no more. It is no surprise that Captain Riley initially has trouble envisioning her as the renowned Blind Girl detective who had solved so many cold cases relatively quickly.
Angel Patience, aware of Fee's evil plot, prepares herself and a troop of angels in eagle form to halt Fee's efforts and protect his unsuspecting employees (and nearby plants and animals) from harm with the help of her requested rainstorm.
It will be hard for readers to wait for the excitement in the next chapter. Your story is building to a climax beyond any you have yet written.
Superb, beautifully illustrated, and well developed for anticipant effect.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the super review of my book chapter, Mike.,the kind stars and detailed comments means so much. As usual, you didn't miss a thing. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :))))))
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You are most welcome, Sal. As you know, I do my best to notice fine details so you have proof hat your efforts were not lost on readers who pay close attention, whether or not they mention them in review.
All your readers will be tense until we see the fight in the next chapter, as we all are rooting for Patience and her eagle angels. :)))))) -- Mike
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Sally,
Your story tells of evil and good spirits in such colorful, creative ways. You never waiver that good always triumphs over evil (oftentimes taking heaven's time in doing so).
A very beautiful story.
Good luck.
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Sally,
Your story tells of evil and good spirits in such colorful, creative ways. You never waiver that good always triumphs over evil (oftentimes taking heaven's time in doing so).
A very beautiful story.
Good luck.
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review of my book chapter, dear Cindy. It is so appreciated. How very kind and sweet you are! Blessings to you always, Sally XOs
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I like, and agree with, Einstein's quote.
I've never named one of my characters after myself, lol! Your alter ego?
We've got an interesting detective (a character new to me) and an angel ready to do battle with evil. Next time!
I'm happy to see Tommy just enjoying his new life and bride, and working on getting better while others take care of the matters before them.
See you next week, Sal:-)
Pam
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I like, and agree with, Einstein's quote.
I've never named one of my characters after myself, lol! Your alter ego?
We've got an interesting detective (a character new to me) and an angel ready to do battle with evil. Next time!
I'm happy to see Tommy just enjoying his new life and bride, and working on getting better while others take care of the matters before them.
See you next week, Sal:-)
Pam
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review amd insightful comments. Yes, six books as the blind detective. It's interesting now to be a guest in another's book. I thought I would keep my blind girl fans hopeful. I wanted to go into forensics as a career but my single mom said absolutely not. So... I write about these things to let off some steam. Blessings back to you and yours, dear Pam. Sal XOs
Comment from Jay Squires
You outdid yourself with your mega images that sound right out of Revelations. Yet nothing was excessive to the theme.
The toilet of his mind continued to churn. [Wow, that's good!]
Here it is only Monday, and I'm nearly out of sixes. But it would be an injustice not to award one here.
Jay
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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You outdid yourself with your mega images that sound right out of Revelations. Yet nothing was excessive to the theme.
The toilet of his mind continued to churn. [Wow, that's good!]
Here it is only Monday, and I'm nearly out of sixes. But it would be an injustice not to award one here.
Jay
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and the dazzling stars, dear Jay. I am so glad you enjoyed this chapter and thought it six worthy. Sending you y best, and blessings always.
Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an entertaining chapter for sure. I'm delighted that you've made yourself a character in your story. What a novel approach. I can't wait to see Fee get his comeuppance!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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This is an entertaining chapter for sure. I'm delighted that you've made yourself a character in your story. What a novel approach. I can't wait to see Fee get his comeuppance!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. That?s so appreciated. I?m so glad you enjoyed it all. Sending along my very best to you and yours, Sally XOs
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Love the way that you take us between the physical and spiritual realms and it seems that Patience has well controlled the situation and is aware of all the evil that Fee has planned. I could visualize the eagles singing!
Great job with this even if I don't have a six left!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Love the way that you take us between the physical and spiritual realms and it seems that Patience has well controlled the situation and is aware of all the evil that Fee has planned. I could visualize the eagles singing!
Great job with this even if I don't have a six left!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter. A virtual six is just fine because I know it comes with love. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment from country ranch writer
Ahh Bad guys better run MsSallys on the job now she and King will get to the bottom of this and get the killers!she's known by her reputation!
Be careful out there!
3-13-2023.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Ahh Bad guys better run MsSallys on the job now she and King will get to the bottom of this and get the killers!she's known by her reputation!
Be careful out there!
3-13-2023.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Dear Barbara, thank you so much for the lovely review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you enjoyed it in like the fact that the blind Detective and King are coming to the rescue. Sending along my very best to you all, Sally XOs
