The Aspen Grove Murders
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Karen ! Sal :)) XOs
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Sally!
I've been back reading to remind myself of events. It is all very sweet, suspenseful, and mysterious all at once. You've taken on so many levels at once. Your work is fast-paced, which appeals to me, and often changes POV, also something I like.
And Sally and King! Gotta love them!
On I go to the next chapter, just thought I'd pop in and comment on this one.
XOXO,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Hi Sally!
I've been back reading to remind myself of events. It is all very sweet, suspenseful, and mysterious all at once. You've taken on so many levels at once. Your work is fast-paced, which appeals to me, and often changes POV, also something I like.
And Sally and King! Gotta love them!
On I go to the next chapter, just thought I'd pop in and comment on this one.
XOXO,
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Dear Rhonda, thank you so much for the awesome review and shiny six stars! I am so very blessed and honored. I?m especially glad you had time to catch up with me.
Sending you all my very best.
Sal XOs
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This seems like an extreme solution. What s it they say? 'A permanent solution for a temporary problem' : "There was nothing else to do except to torch the house" I'm glad you put in the networth facts. I'd never thought of a person being worth $$. But everyone famous it. It may raise some reader's curiosity, & you can inform them. There are so many good points to bring out, like the mention of food, use of metaphors & similes, juxtaposition which carries much of your book. etc. Great work.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This seems like an extreme solution. What s it they say? 'A permanent solution for a temporary problem' : "There was nothing else to do except to torch the house" I'm glad you put in the networth facts. I'd never thought of a person being worth $$. But everyone famous it. It may raise some reader's curiosity, & you can inform them. There are so many good points to bring out, like the mention of food, use of metaphors & similes, juxtaposition which carries much of your book. etc. Great work.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate it so much. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
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Comment from poetwatch
War is on the horizon, for darkness doesn't live where there is light, Sally. I'm still here and your description of the angels, "Their heavenly bodies were that of an eagle, and their heads were part eagle and part human," reminds me of a cloud formation I saw once. It sailed the skies as if looking over mankind. It had great wings that touched it legs and on it head was an eagle's beak with nose and mouth beneath. it was awesome, but then I turned away to check out a vixen and when I looked up it was sailing straight up looking down at me for I saw him.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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War is on the horizon, for darkness doesn't live where there is light, Sally. I'm still here and your description of the angels, "Their heavenly bodies were that of an eagle, and their heads were part eagle and part human," reminds me of a cloud formation I saw once. It sailed the skies as if looking over mankind. It had great wings that touched it legs and on it head was an eagle's beak with nose and mouth beneath. it was awesome, but then I turned away to check out a vixen and when I looked up it was sailing straight up looking down at me for I saw him.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review, Jose! I appreciate the personal feedback about the Eagle/ angels. Sending you all my very best today as always.
Sal xo
Comment from patcelaw
Your story is a good story. It was a good one to listen to. I'm not sure. I totally understand it because I'm not feeling very well today. Please keep me in your prayers because my gallbladder is gonna have to be removed and I'm headed for surgery will in a couple weeks probably. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Your story is a good story. It was a good one to listen to. I'm not sure. I totally understand it because I'm not feeling very well today. Please keep me in your prayers because my gallbladder is gonna have to be removed and I'm headed for surgery will in a couple weeks probably. Patricia.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for reading me today, dear Patricia. I?m so sorry that your gallbladder is acting up and that you?re not feeling well. How special am I that you would take the time to read this.
Lord, I pray for Patricia that you would heal and touch her now and help her with her gallbladder. God we know that you are our healer and that you bring comfort and peace with your healing. I pray this for my friend in Jesus? name, Amen!
Sal XOs
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Thank you for your prayers.
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Most welcome. You rest up!
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
There are a lot of pots on the stove.
Fee is planning his escape. It involves a huge loss, but he doesn't care. He wants out, but not without revenge. Seems like he's even planning to kill his five house servants.
Detective Sally has finally arrived with her team to aid in taking down the evil in Aspen Grove. A formidable posse to the rescue. Now this story sounds complete!
Tommy is headed for evaluation with his new bride, Willa. Wouldn't the doctors be surprised if they couldn't find the tumor?
And Patience has called for help. An army of angels has arrived to do battle, and take back Aspen Grove.
There is no shortage of demons, and I'm sure DeeCayed and Nix won't be left alone to face God's angel band. There could be quite a struggle on the horizon. And there must be other people besides Fee who have fallen in with Beelzebub's horde. Where are they? Who are they? And is Detective Sally and her team up for a different kind of sinister hooligans?
Excellent chapter! I loved it. I wonder if Sally will be introduced to Patience as Tommy was in an earlier chapter? Patience and her allies can take care of DeeCayed and Nix. Detective Sally and King and the others will have to take care of Fee and company.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Hi Sally,
There are a lot of pots on the stove.
Fee is planning his escape. It involves a huge loss, but he doesn't care. He wants out, but not without revenge. Seems like he's even planning to kill his five house servants.
Detective Sally has finally arrived with her team to aid in taking down the evil in Aspen Grove. A formidable posse to the rescue. Now this story sounds complete!
Tommy is headed for evaluation with his new bride, Willa. Wouldn't the doctors be surprised if they couldn't find the tumor?
And Patience has called for help. An army of angels has arrived to do battle, and take back Aspen Grove.
There is no shortage of demons, and I'm sure DeeCayed and Nix won't be left alone to face God's angel band. There could be quite a struggle on the horizon. And there must be other people besides Fee who have fallen in with Beelzebub's horde. Where are they? Who are they? And is Detective Sally and her team up for a different kind of sinister hooligans?
Excellent chapter! I loved it. I wonder if Sally will be introduced to Patience as Tommy was in an earlier chapter? Patience and her allies can take care of DeeCayed and Nix. Detective Sally and King and the others will have to take care of Fee and company.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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You must?ve read my thoughts! I was just wondering where you were. So glad to see you, Kim, and I am especially glad you enjoyed my chapter. Yep, there?s a lot going on. There?s a lot more coming too. Thank you so much for the support and generous stars, too. It means the world to me. Sending along my very best to you all and prayers too for your family.
Sal XOs
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Did I tell you that they finally released Luke from hospital on Monday night? He was in there 8 days altogether. We've had a rough ride so far in 2023.
KB
Comment from Pearl Edwards
FEE is in for a surprise when his plans become watered down. A very descriptive chapter Sally, especially in the descriptions of Patience and her many helpers. Enjoyed it, a great read.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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FEE is in for a surprise when his plans become watered down. A very descriptive chapter Sally, especially in the descriptions of Patience and her many helpers. Enjoyed it, a great read.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review of my book chapter, dear Valda. It?s so appreciated. So glad you?re enjoying my book. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Cindy Warren
It looks like Fee's plan isn't going to work. Hopefully the servants will be safe in the wine cellar until the fire is out. Fee might end up cooking himself. Then nobody has to worry about him. I don't know if the two demons can burn, but they'll probably wish they could when Patience and her eagles get hold of them.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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It looks like Fee's plan isn't going to work. Hopefully the servants will be safe in the wine cellar until the fire is out. Fee might end up cooking himself. Then nobody has to worry about him. I don't know if the two demons can burn, but they'll probably wish they could when Patience and her eagles get hold of them.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and insightful comments. Stay tune is getting ready to heat up in every way. Sending along my very best and many thanks for your kind review, Sally XOs
Comment from Shirley McLain
This was a nice setup chapter for Sally. I think she will have her hands full with this bad guy and the demons. You did a wonderful job, as always. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Have a great day. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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This was a nice setup chapter for Sally. I think she will have her hands full with this bad guy and the demons. You did a wonderful job, as always. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter and for the kind compliments. The stars are pretty pleasing too! You?re so very kind and generous to me, dear Shirley. Thank you again and God bless you real good.
Sal XOs
Comment from Sankey
Another great, but creepy read as usual. I am glad to catch up and I look forward to where this is going. I hope to get some more new stuff up, real soon. No spags.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Another great, but creepy read as usual. I am glad to catch up and I look forward to where this is going. I hope to get some more new stuff up, real soon. No spags.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
