Porta John
A Lowku Poem entry10 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
Haha. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear jlr! Truly disgusting as required! Rather funny and fun.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Haha. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear jlr! Truly disgusting as required! Rather funny and fun.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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I am humbly grateful for your kind words and blessings 🙏
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My pleasure entirely dear jlr <3
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the Lowku contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated, and it meets the requirements. The visual would be better if you cropped the unnecessary words off of it before uploading it. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a good entry into the Lowku contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated, and it meets the requirements. The visual would be better if you cropped the unnecessary words off of it before uploading it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the Lowku Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Nice imagery and presentation.
Kind of rude.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Good entry for the Lowku Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Nice imagery and presentation.
Kind of rude.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Yes, this, for certain, is not my cup, of tea, in terms of poetry contests.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
this is evidently a gross situation. Poo everywhere; and must clean it up would be gross. There is nothing worse than cleaning up a tipped porta john. Good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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this is evidently a gross situation. Poo everywhere; and must clean it up would be gross. There is nothing worse than cleaning up a tipped porta john. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Miserable, I would think is an understatement!
Comment from John Ciarmello
They are the vilest places on the planet, and I have a hard time using one, but when nature calls, we must Doodoo our Doo-dee. Sorry I couldn't resist! I loved this! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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They are the vilest places on the planet, and I have a hard time using one, but when nature calls, we must Doodoo our Doo-dee. Sorry I couldn't resist! I loved this! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Ha,,ha, ha. You did do dooo it for sure! 😁
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Porta johns are so gross! A perfect subject for this sort of poem. If you want a good laugh you should seek out the joke about the two kids who pushed over the outhouse. The best version is done by Wes Harrison who does vocal sfx.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Porta johns are so gross! A perfect subject for this sort of poem. If you want a good laugh you should seek out the joke about the two kids who pushed over the outhouse. The best version is done by Wes Harrison who does vocal sfx.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thanks
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! love this one, hard to repel someone in a few words, but you have met this prompt with an unsightly mess, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Ha! Ha! love this one, hard to repel someone in a few words, but you have met this prompt with an unsightly mess, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thanks
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words were descriptive, Mystery Author, and
gross at the same time as required. The picture is
even more gross. Your syllable count is off in each
line--not the 575 as required.
Best wishes if you revise, Jan
revised rating to 5
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Your words were descriptive, Mystery Author, and
gross at the same time as required. The picture is
even more gross. Your syllable count is off in each
line--not the 575 as required.
Best wishes if you revise, Jan
revised rating to 5
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Geez which still hung up with a Collom Lune, fixed this. Thanks!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with this clever play on words and I have never heard of this form before and I think you fulfilled the brief for this contest here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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You made me smile with this clever play on words and I have never heard of this form before and I think you fulfilled the brief for this contest here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thanks Dolly, sick humor, sort of cheeky, not my favorite.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
By golly, I think you've done exactly what was required here! Crap, I've never heard of this poetry form:-)
Good luck with this disgusting contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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By golly, I think you've done exactly what was required here! Crap, I've never heard of this poetry form:-)
Good luck with this disgusting contest.
Pam
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Kinda of a cheeky contest, for certain!