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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You sure landed farming country that would be handed down to you in the years to come. Nashville is a musical city where many travel to see popular stars constantly. What a transition from Heritage Hall to where you are now.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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You sure landed farming country that would be handed down to you in the years to come. Nashville is a musical city where many travel to see popular stars constantly. What a transition from Heritage Hall to where you are now.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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That it was. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a good story but there is one little bit of confusion you need to clear up. Dusty is the son of Buck but when you returned to discussing Buck you need to remind the reader that he is Dusty's father. Did you ever meet Lois or Buck? That would be good to know. My grandfather had a place like Bucks that was called the Kitkat Club. I do enjoy your stories of your life.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This is a good story but there is one little bit of confusion you need to clear up. Dusty is the son of Buck but when you returned to discussing Buck you need to remind the reader that he is Dusty's father. Did you ever meet Lois or Buck? That would be good to know. My grandfather had a place like Bucks that was called the Kitkat Club. I do enjoy your stories of your life.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your suggestion and the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, moonshine and that good ole charcoal blended whiskey that we had to climb up into the lofts and turn with regularity was worth its weight in gold from around where I was from. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Oh, moonshine and that good ole charcoal blended whiskey that we had to climb up into the lofts and turn with regularity was worth its weight in gold from around where I was from. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Moonshine, and Jack Daniels. Had more than my share of the Black Label in my younger days. My favorite drink back then was a Pina colada with a shot of Jack poured in the middle of it. Sweet and sour. Glad to see you can relate to these experiences. Appreciate the review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
another fine chapter documenting your interesting life. I didn't realize that Tennessee had so many thunderstorms. I thought of settling down there more than once. I used to pass through the state on my way to Ohio from Charleston SC. It has some breathtaking areas. Thanks for sharing this.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Hello Brett,
another fine chapter documenting your interesting life. I didn't realize that Tennessee had so many thunderstorms. I thought of settling down there more than once. I used to pass through the state on my way to Ohio from Charleston SC. It has some breathtaking areas. Thanks for sharing this.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the reviewl
Comment from country ranch writer
Things back when growing up didn't come easy to most folks. Everything comes with a price putting blockades in the way but it made us appreciate more about life like dusty instilled you when he adopted you, You forget the awful life you left behind years to come down the road. Mire people need a kind heart like Dusty.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Things back when growing up didn't come easy to most folks. Everything comes with a price putting blockades in the way but it made us appreciate more about life like dusty instilled you when he adopted you, You forget the awful life you left behind years to come down the road. Mire people need a kind heart like Dusty.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thanks for your comments and the review.
Comment from country ranch writer
Things back when growing up didn't come easy to most folks. Everything comes with a price putting blockades in the way but it made us appreciate more about life like dusty instilled you when he adopted you, You forget the awful life you left behind years to come down the road. Mire people need a kind heart like Dusty.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Things back when growing up didn't come easy to most folks. Everything comes with a price putting blockades in the way but it made us appreciate more about life like dusty instilled you when he adopted you, You forget the awful life you left behind years to come down the road. Mire people need a kind heart like Dusty.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
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Comment from Wendy G
A lovely chapter, and it is good to know more about Dusty and his family and background. How wonderful that you found each other. He seems to be both extremely caring and very insightful. Just what you needed. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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A lovely chapter, and it is good to know more about Dusty and his family and background. How wonderful that you found each other. He seems to be both extremely caring and very insightful. Just what you needed. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Finding him changed most of everything for the better for me. Appreciate your comments and the reviewl
Comment from nancy_e_davis
That was smart of Dusty to encourage you to write. What better way to keep tabs on a growing boy. I never heard of a boy having a diary. LOL Good job Brett. I enjoy your story. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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That was smart of Dusty to encourage you to write. What better way to keep tabs on a growing boy. I never heard of a boy having a diary. LOL Good job Brett. I enjoy your story. Nancy:)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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He kept tabs on me, sometimes very close tabs. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Sankey
So glad I had a SIX for this wonderful insight into your adoptive Dad's passed on twin, and your adoptive Grandfather and so on. No spags but I loved this word and wonder if you made it up, yourself? "imaginativenes" as in kind of genes, ha. Maybe we need a "Brettossary" like my "Geoffossary" of my own made-up words. Look for Geoffossary at the end of my LIttle Dog book.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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So glad I had a SIX for this wonderful insight into your adoptive Dad's passed on twin, and your adoptive Grandfather and so on. No spags but I loved this word and wonder if you made it up, yourself? "imaginativenes" as in kind of genes, ha. Maybe we need a "Brettossary" like my "Geoffossary" of my own made-up words. Look for Geoffossary at the end of my LIttle Dog book.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Always appreciate your comments and reviews.
Comment from GWHARGIS
If I haven't told you before, I am enjoying the heck out of this memoir. I like how you don't just plop us down in a scene. You give the reader history and reasons. Very good imagery and details of both big things and minute things. Great installment. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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If I haven't told you before, I am enjoying the heck out of this memoir. I like how you don't just plop us down in a scene. You give the reader history and reasons. Very good imagery and details of both big things and minute things. Great installment. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Glad you are enjoying my autobiography. Appreciate your comments and the review.