Vader
He'll find your lack of treats disturbing17 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
I had to look at this because I once had a cat named Vader. It looks like this Vader is adorable and a great friend. I like the Yoda grammar to bring in that "Star Wars" feeling to your verse. Nice rhyming too.
It looks like you took third in the contest. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I had to look at this because I once had a cat named Vader. It looks like this Vader is adorable and a great friend. I like the Yoda grammar to bring in that "Star Wars" feeling to your verse. Nice rhyming too.
It looks like you took third in the contest. Congratulations.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I love that you've had a Vader, too! I'm surprised at how rarely I hear that. Thanks so much!
Comment from JT traveller
Very humurous twist on Darth Vader. Imagine if your image was an animation and Vader said, "Luke, I am your father." ð???
Lovely poem. Well composed and a great way to start my day. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Very humurous twist on Darth Vader. Imagine if your image was an animation and Vader said, "Luke, I am your father." ð???
Lovely poem. Well composed and a great way to start my day. Jacqueline
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Oh, if only! I so wish it was. Thank you for your awesome review. :)
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Have a great day 😊🇦🇺
Comment from mermaids
Love the pic of your dog and your words fit him perfectly. I like the analogy to Star Wars. This dog looks like the Force is definitely with him. Excellent poem for this fun contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Love the pic of your dog and your words fit him perfectly. I like the analogy to Star Wars. This dog looks like the Force is definitely with him. Excellent poem for this fun contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thanks you! He's a character, all right!
Comment from Alan Tryens
Congratulations on your 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing. With just those few words I feel I know a lot about your dog Vader, strong, loving and loyal. What more could you want from your dog? I thought the poem was very well written. I haven't tried to write a 5-7-5 poem yet, but yours gives me ideas.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Congratulations on your 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing. With just those few words I feel I know a lot about your dog Vader, strong, loving and loyal. What more could you want from your dog? I thought the poem was very well written. I haven't tried to write a 5-7-5 poem yet, but yours gives me ideas.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you, kindly!! He is a good boy, and an inspiration, apparently! I appreciate your feedback, I'll be sure to look for your for your future 5-7-5!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing prompt contest. I love the Star Wars reference lol
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing prompt contest. I love the Star Wars reference lol
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Gypsy! Truly appreciated
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A very well-groomed dog. The image is gorgeous. The dog must be powerful on a leash. Where did you get the name, Vader? Have not heard this name before, but there must be a meaning.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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A very well-groomed dog. The image is gorgeous. The dog must be powerful on a leash. Where did you get the name, Vader? Have not heard this name before, but there must be a meaning.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, he is a strong one! Named after Darth Vader of Star Wars :)
Comment from karenina
I think "Yoda" speak works very well here, as "Vader" seems way too lovable to ever be on the dark side of anything but the beautiful coat he is blessed with! Handsome indeed! Speaking of treats ~ this was a treat of a 5-7-5!
May the force be with VADER!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I think "Yoda" speak works very well here, as "Vader" seems way too lovable to ever be on the dark side of anything but the beautiful coat he is blessed with! Handsome indeed! Speaking of treats ~ this was a treat of a 5-7-5!
May the force be with VADER!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your awesome review! Vader appreciates it, as well. :)
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Yay, to Vader...and you!
Comment from Shirley McLain
Sometimes I think my dogs are also on the dark side. It's as if I have a house full of three year olds. You did a marvelous job with your pet poem. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Sometimes I think my dogs are also on the dark side. It's as if I have a house full of three year olds. You did a marvelous job with your pet poem. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Shirley! How many dogs do you have? My kids relentlessly try and convince me that Vader needs a buddy. I'm starting to cave!
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I have 5 little ones in the house and 4 large in the back. They are all rescues, but two. My fear is, what happens to the dogs if something happens to me? Go ahead and cave, I can't image being without mine. They are work at times, but the reward is great.
Comment from jmdg1954
Vader looks like a strong, beautiful dog. I'm honestly not quite following the flow of words describing Vader, but the look in his eyes does induce strength.
Best of luck in the contest, my friend!
John
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Vader looks like a strong, beautiful dog. I'm honestly not quite following the flow of words describing Vader, but the look in his eyes does induce strength.
Best of luck in the contest, my friend!
John
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, John!
Just to clarify- lines one and three are structured that way intentionally. Its meant to reference Star Wars character "Yoda" and his unique dialect. Reason being- Vader was named after another character from this movie- Darth Vader
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 5-7-5 Pet contest. The text is a great size. The second line is stated with clarity. However, lines one and three are awkwardly worded. This makes the message unclear. Vader is a regal and attractive dog. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the 5-7-5 Pet contest. The text is a great size. The second line is stated with clarity. However, lines one and three are awkwardly worded. This makes the message unclear. Vader is a regal and attractive dog. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your feedback, Sandra! Just to explain- lines one and three were intentionally structured that way to reference Star Wars character "Yoda" and his unique dialect. Vader was named after another character from the movie- Darth Vader
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You are welcome. I may be one of the few on the planet that never watched any of the Star Wars movies. Perhaps, put that info in the AN for the few people like me. I will change my rating because of your explanation.
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate that! Excellent suggestion, I will do that!
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I believe in learning and in being fair. You are welcome.
