Dribbles And Drabbles
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Potion"A Collection Of Mini Stories
12 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's amazing what a few crumbs can do to draw in the unsuspecting prey. LOL. I'm really enjoying all these flash stories that get us to the punch so quickly. Wish I had a six. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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It's amazing what a few crumbs can do to draw in the unsuspecting prey. LOL. I'm really enjoying all these flash stories that get us to the punch so quickly. Wish I had a six. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Always so supportive. Much appreciated.
Comment from country ranch writer
Remind me not to go out inin the wee hours of the morning I don't like things popping out to scare me. If you're demon is in forb the long haul Imjust mightbdomhimin and send him back where he came from!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Remind me not to go out inin the wee hours of the morning I don't like things popping out to scare me. If you're demon is in forb the long haul Imjust mightbdomhimin and send him back where he came from!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate your comments and the review.
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I don't like the dark it's creepy gives me the chills just thinking about it oh my gosh why did not stay inside
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This horror write is full of deceit and treachery and poison is such an underhanded way to kill someone and was the preferred method of many Victorian women trying to kill their husbands with arsenic, a tongue in cheek horror, much enjoyed Brett, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This horror write is full of deceit and treachery and poison is such an underhanded way to kill someone and was the preferred method of many Victorian women trying to kill their husbands with arsenic, a tongue in cheek horror, much enjoyed Brett, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, Brett, this was as rather scary story you wrote and the in so very few words. I wouldn't hav we liked to be there when all this came down. It's very well written. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Oh dear, Brett, this was as rather scary story you wrote and the in so very few words. I wouldn't hav we liked to be there when all this came down. It's very well written. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review. This posting a little something different.
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a quick tale of potions, fooling birds, and starting a fun game of What Would Happen If. Funny how unconcerned seagulls are when free food is involved. Mistake. When the potion wears off, this guy may need to floss.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This is a quick tale of potions, fooling birds, and starting a fun game of What Would Happen If. Funny how unconcerned seagulls are when free food is involved. Mistake. When the potion wears off, this guy may need to floss.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Very good flash fiction, and I enjoyed the read. You did a great job. Is this for a contest or just you writing flash fiction? I'd give you a six, but I don't have one. Enjoy your afternoon. Shirley
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Very good flash fiction, and I enjoyed the read. You did a great job. Is this for a contest or just you writing flash fiction? I'd give you a six, but I don't have one. Enjoy your afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A trail of carrion behind him. YUCK!! I keep checking to see if I missed this is a contest entry, but it doesn't seem to be. I enjoyed reading. This is dark, but well written.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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A trail of carrion behind him. YUCK!! I keep checking to see if I missed this is a contest entry, but it doesn't seem to be. I enjoyed reading. This is dark, but well written.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
I assume the bread crumbs the birds fed on were poisoned by something in the bottle. The gulls flesh rotted very quickly with all that dashing around he was doing. The birds were hungry, but I'm not sure those coming from the motel would be quite so quick to consume dead bird flesh. just having walk through it would be horror enough. You are very good at writing flash fiction.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I assume the bread crumbs the birds fed on were poisoned by something in the bottle. The gulls flesh rotted very quickly with all that dashing around he was doing. The birds were hungry, but I'm not sure those coming from the motel would be quite so quick to consume dead bird flesh. just having walk through it would be horror enough. You are very good at writing flash fiction.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Well, a suggestion for the demon. Here at our local beaches scattering Natural lite cans would certainly get the desired effect he was looking for. These shorts or flash fiction are great. Each one has been unique. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Well, a suggestion for the demon. Here at our local beaches scattering Natural lite cans would certainly get the desired effect he was looking for. These shorts or flash fiction are great. Each one has been unique. Gretchen
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from patcelaw
This is an interesting flash fiction story I enjoyed it I do. Hope you are doing well with your autobiography book. I hope you will have a great day. May your day be blessed. Patricia.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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This is an interesting flash fiction story I enjoyed it I do. Hope you are doing well with your autobiography book. I hope you will have a great day. May your day be blessed. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Much appreciated review.