Changing seasons.
I trinet about changing seasons21 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very well written Trinet poem you have penned about changing seasons. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very well written Trinet poem you have penned about changing seasons. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your review. It is always appreciated.
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You are so welcome!!!💕💕💕
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Pat, the changes of the season are delightful, although I am no longer a fan of snow. I think that Autumn is my favorite season of all. I like the warmer days and the crispy nights. It's the time of year when you can open your windows with delight. Good imagery, especially:
Fall arrives with leaves, turning to gold
(I like the gold leaves, but where would they be without the crimson leaves--lol)
Well done. Beautiful artwork choice. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Hi Pat, the changes of the season are delightful, although I am no longer a fan of snow. I think that Autumn is my favorite season of all. I like the warmer days and the crispy nights. It's the time of year when you can open your windows with delight. Good imagery, especially:
Fall arrives with leaves, turning to gold
(I like the gold leaves, but where would they be without the crimson leaves--lol)
Well done. Beautiful artwork choice. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your review. It is always appreciated.
Comment from w.j.debi
I enjoy the seasons and how they blend into each other and move forward. I feel fortunate to live an area where they are distinct.
You give a celebratory feeling to those changing season, like you are embracing each one. Excellent present ion to enhance your verse--beautiful color choice and artwork.
I enjoy the Trinet form-one of the few that uses word count instead of syllable count.
I notice seven words instead of six in line four. I am assuming you are taking poetic license--which I love.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I enjoy the seasons and how they blend into each other and move forward. I feel fortunate to live an area where they are distinct.
You give a celebratory feeling to those changing season, like you are embracing each one. Excellent present ion to enhance your verse--beautiful color choice and artwork.
I enjoy the Trinet form-one of the few that uses word count instead of syllable count.
I notice seven words instead of six in line four. I am assuming you are taking poetic license--which I love.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate it so much.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
That picture is amazing and goes well with the great descriptions you give for each season. The coloring, words and picture are done with an artist's eye. Captivating and beautiful.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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That picture is amazing and goes well with the great descriptions you give for each season. The coloring, words and picture are done with an artist's eye. Captivating and beautiful.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I always appreciate it. Have a good day.
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing the joy of the beauties of Fall and Spring in your trinet poem, Patricia! The Lord makes everything beautiful in its time. We can give Him the praise and glory!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thanks for sharing the joy of the beauties of Fall and Spring in your trinet poem, Patricia! The Lord makes everything beautiful in its time. We can give Him the praise and glory!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your excellent review. I appreciate always when I see reviews from you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This was a great seasons poem, Patricia. I loved the perfect
picture. Your words were descriptive with a great comparison
of the different seasons. I liked the use of end rhyme, too. This
seemed to be the style that forms a cross when centered. We
have 2 seasons hot and hotter.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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This was a great seasons poem, Patricia. I loved the perfect
picture. Your words were descriptive with a great comparison
of the different seasons. I liked the use of end rhyme, too. This
seemed to be the style that forms a cross when centered. We
have 2 seasons hot and hotter.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Material. We have some really hot weather during the summer months here. Usually last from May to the end of September. Thank you for your kind remarks and review Patricia.
Comment from BethShelby
I like your poem that reminds me of the fact I'm glad I live where the seasons actually show a change. When I lived in New Orleans I enjoyed the milder temperature. Fall and Winter and also Spring were short-lived seasons. Most of the year was like summer. There wasn't the brilliant changes in the colored leaves in the fall. Chattanooga is beautiful in the fall and spring and tolerable in Winter and Summer.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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I like your poem that reminds me of the fact I'm glad I live where the seasons actually show a change. When I lived in New Orleans I enjoyed the milder temperature. Fall and Winter and also Spring were short-lived seasons. Most of the year was like summer. There wasn't the brilliant changes in the colored leaves in the fall. Chattanooga is beautiful in the fall and spring and tolerable in Winter and Summer.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. Where I live in Phoenix area most of the time the temperatures are other tolerable, but this winter has been exceptionally cold for us. To do my walking. I have to wait until in the afternoon to be able to walk because it?s too cold outside to walk.
Comment from Mintybee
This is a nice comment on the seasons and how the change affects us. They all have things about them that are notable, but perhaps the most notable is that none of them stay for long. I'm glad your poem shows an appreciation for change in itself.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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This is a nice comment on the seasons and how the change affects us. They all have things about them that are notable, but perhaps the most notable is that none of them stay for long. I'm glad your poem shows an appreciation for change in itself.
Mintybee
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Faith Williams
The changing of the seasons is a delight to my soul as well. I like the picture you paint of leaves turning to gold. Thanks so much for sharing your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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The changing of the seasons is a delight to my soul as well. I like the picture you paint of leaves turning to gold. Thanks so much for sharing your lovely poem.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your very lovely review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Sally Law
I love so many things about each season and appreciate them all. I have children and grandchildren born in each season too. Sending you my best today as always for this lovely poem. Sal XO
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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I love so many things about each season and appreciate them all. I have children and grandchildren born in each season too. Sending you my best today as always for this lovely poem. Sal XO
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much. Of all the seasons, fall would be my favorite season. I appreciate you review.
