Taste of My Reality
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Holy smoke's Batman what is multitude a subjects you have risen in this writing all different places at all different times how cool is that!.
And unexpected and surprising! You woke me up! And as usual you write with your usual aplomb professionalism variety and imagination as well as facts and figures when it suits the project you're working on.
Very good! Thank you and I wish you a great day!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Holy smoke's Batman what is multitude a subjects you have risen in this writing all different places at all different times how cool is that!.
And unexpected and surprising! You woke me up! And as usual you write with your usual aplomb professionalism variety and imagination as well as facts and figures when it suits the project you're working on.
Very good! Thank you and I wish you a great day!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I've been writing on this site for close to 14 years now.
I met a lot of writers, reviewed a lot of writers and had a lot of writers review me.
But you seem to be my biggest fan!
Learn from me!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
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I quite enjoy the things you write I find them entertaining engaging Colorful full of life and I never have to doubt what you're trying to say
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing your reality with us. You need a comma after every name you address. I only pointed out a few. You may also want to put a language warning on this one too.
'Einstein what do I pay you for?' (comma after "Einstein')
'Well Captain as far as I can figure by calculating our last location at Warp on my,, (comma after "Well' and only one comma after 'my')
'Well the way Eye see it Captain.' (comma after 'Well' and one after 'it')
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you for sharing your reality with us. You need a comma after every name you address. I only pointed out a few. You may also want to put a language warning on this one too.
'Einstein what do I pay you for?' (comma after "Einstein')
'Well Captain as far as I can figure by calculating our last location at Warp on my,, (comma after "Well' and only one comma after 'my')
'Well the way Eye see it Captain.' (comma after 'Well' and one after 'it')
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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That was very sloppy of me. I just did a complete check over I think is better now.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
