Taste of My Reality
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
It sounds as if this casino is a dangerous place. I'm glad I never went there when I was in the area. Thank you for sharing this post with us.
Siler dance, shoes moves. (Silver dance shoes move????)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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It sounds as if this casino is a dangerous place. I'm glad I never went there when I was in the area. Thank you for sharing this post with us.
Siler dance, shoes moves. (Silver dance shoes move????)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thanks fixed the silver shoes issue.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow that was a very cool poem thank you very much! You definitely speak to something that happens on a regular basis but you're freezing your own perspective it gives it newness.
I always enjoy your writing and your subject matters unique simple things that mean a lot of things sometimes.
I thank you for your submission and am always happy to read.!
I couldn't think of any way to improve upon what you've already written. And I'm not sure that I would try since you definitely have a unique talent! Have a major talent.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Wow that was a very cool poem thank you very much! You definitely speak to something that happens on a regular basis but you're freezing your own perspective it gives it newness.
I always enjoy your writing and your subject matters unique simple things that mean a lot of things sometimes.
I thank you for your submission and am always happy to read.!
I couldn't think of any way to improve upon what you've already written. And I'm not sure that I would try since you definitely have a unique talent! Have a major talent.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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I think you so very much Lea for picking up on this one and have a blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky
