Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What a well written, though poignant, memory you shared,
Mystery Author. I enjoyed how you included so much history
of your beloved. Your words were well thought out and painted
a great picture of this awesome man. You have many memories
of him, hopefully happy ones of your life together. Through it
all. You and he made it work despite family and in laws. I'm glad
your grands have great memories of Paw-Paw.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, Jan.
I really appreciate the 5 stars.
May you have a happy and
inspirational week.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Great write up. Sorry, I got so wrapped up in the story line that I forgot to look for mistakes.

Death sucks. It's the worst part of living. Your feelings really shined through on this piece. Great work.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, Douglas. I got emotional
penning this mini-memoir
and memorial story. We miss
him so much. I really appreciate your sensitive
review and 5 stars. Have a
creative and inspirational
week.

reply by Douglas Goff on 06-Mar-2023

This was a great tribute! Thanks for sharing.