Dribbles And Drabbles
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Party Animal"A Collection Of Mini Stories
8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word story, Party Animal, has the required word count and pulls the readers into Stella's well-planned day of good experiences before ending it. I guess a good night's sleep might make one thing there could never be a better one.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This seventy-five-word story, Party Animal, has the required word count and pulls the readers into Stella's well-planned day of good experiences before ending it. I guess a good night's sleep might make one thing there could never be a better one.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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So insightful. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I assume (offed) means (topped) herself here. She obviously loved her food immensely but still wanted to end your life, the last supper, good luck with the contest Brett, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I assume (offed) means (topped) herself here. She obviously loved her food immensely but still wanted to end your life, the last supper, good luck with the contest Brett, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm certainly becoming more and more of a fan of flash fiction and I'm sure enjoying your posts in Dribbles and Drabbles. A few short words that can say so much in such short space. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I'm certainly becoming more and more of a fan of flash fiction and I'm sure enjoying your posts in Dribbles and Drabbles. A few short words that can say so much in such short space. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Big ole thanks as always.
Comment from T B Botts
Hi Brett,
Wow, that's pretty dark. One has to wonder if she slept so good because she knew it would be her last night, or if the decision she made to kill herself gave her the peace she needed to sleep soundly. Perhaps after a few great meals she would realize that if she were gone there would be no more enjoyable meals to come and would reconsider. Well written.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Hi Brett,
Wow, that's pretty dark. One has to wonder if she slept so good because she knew it would be her last night, or if the decision she made to kill herself gave her the peace she needed to sleep soundly. Perhaps after a few great meals she would realize that if she were gone there would be no more enjoyable meals to come and would reconsider. Well written.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I am wondering why Stella feels the need to commit suicide. I'm sure I am reading way more into this contest entry than I should. The writing is very good. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I am wondering why Stella feels the need to commit suicide. I'm sure I am reading way more into this contest entry than I should. The writing is very good. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Mk Flood
Off herself? Wow..lol..kinda funny how this cartoon you choose came to be. I forgotten the writer's name but years back she asked me to work in her dog in with my cartoon series "Funnie Flowers". Did it in a day and then she changed her mind selected a photo. Quite common for writers to do that to artist on FAR side. No worries. I'm glad someone got some use from it. Unusual story and good job as well. MKFLOOD
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Off herself? Wow..lol..kinda funny how this cartoon you choose came to be. I forgotten the writer's name but years back she asked me to work in her dog in with my cartoon series "Funnie Flowers". Did it in a day and then she changed her mind selected a photo. Quite common for writers to do that to artist on FAR side. No worries. I'm glad someone got some use from it. Unusual story and good job as well. MKFLOOD
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate you making your artwork, which by the way is outstanding, available so a writer like me can use them. Also appreciate your review.
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I'm an easy find on the internet..just put in my name MKFLOOD on Google, explorer or YouTube and you might be surprised in what you will discover..wink
Comment from Dr. Nad
The 75 word flash fiction entry is a mystery wrapped in an enigma to me. I'm not really sure where Stella is coming from and exactly what she's going to offer herself up for but it is really nice to know that she's gonna have a good breakfast in and a lovely dinner. L O L Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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The 75 word flash fiction entry is a mystery wrapped in an enigma to me. I'm not really sure where Stella is coming from and exactly what she's going to offer herself up for but it is really nice to know that she's gonna have a good breakfast in and a lovely dinner. L O L Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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She is not going to offer herself for anything. She is going to off (kill) herself. Believe you misread this but appreciate the review.
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Brett you are right, it went clear over my head. Lol You had a front row seat to my incompetence and the resulting misunderstanding. L. O. L. And you are most welcome for my feeble attempt.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yikes! I knew something was going to happen but I was still surprised by the ending! So she offed herself after having the day of her life! What a pity! Thanks for the twist in just 75 words!
Jesse
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Yikes! I knew something was going to happen but I was still surprised by the ending! So she offed herself after having the day of her life! What a pity! Thanks for the twist in just 75 words!
Jesse
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.