Naturally Nature
A 5-7-5 Poem7 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 5-7-5 entry about nature. The text is a great size, and I like it being a color. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. Your last line is great! Your entire presentation is well done. You need an apostrophe between the t and s in daylights (daylight's)The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest. I voted for your entry.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is a good 5-7-5 entry about nature. The text is a great size, and I like it being a color. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. Your last line is great! Your entire presentation is well done. You need an apostrophe between the t and s in daylights (daylight's)The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest. I voted for your entry.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your image is stunning. The birds form a "V" shape when they fly to warmer temps in fall. Writing nature poems is the best as a person can tell a story about anything God has created on this earth.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Your image is stunning. The birds form a "V" shape when they fly to warmer temps in fall. Writing nature poems is the best as a person can tell a story about anything God has created on this earth.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from w.j.debi
I sighed when I read this. The verse creates such a beautiful image. I especially like the middle line and the birds rising for nature's encore. What a delightful thought.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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I sighed when I read this. The verse creates such a beautiful image. I especially like the middle line and the birds rising for nature's encore. What a delightful thought.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! I especially enjoyed the second line. Nature's encore indeed. Another day, another way.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! I especially enjoyed the second line. Nature's encore indeed. Another day, another way.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from Dr. Nad
What a beautiful and unique picture you have provided to represent a wonderful poem that celebrates the combination of love and the beauty that God has created for us in nature. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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What a beautiful and unique picture you have provided to represent a wonderful poem that celebrates the combination of love and the beauty that God has created for us in nature. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
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Sorry to take so long to respond to your reaction to my review. Life conflicts have been keeping me off of FanStory. You are most welcome for my review of your work.
Comment from patcelaw
I found your entire presentation is very well done. The image you used is perfect for your words. The coloring that you use are excellent. I wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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I found your entire presentation is very well done. The image you used is perfect for your words. The coloring that you use are excellent. I wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The photograph is magical and your matching words are loving and romantic as these birds know how to love and be loyal to their partners, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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The photograph is magical and your matching words are loving and romantic as these birds know how to love and be loyal to their partners, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much