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Random Rhyme and Petty Prose

Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "March is In "
a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Haha. You are getting better with poetry and I bet you enjoy it. I do, too. I'm not freezing because I'm in Spain. It was 70F today in Seville. But it's not the Bull Fight season.

Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
    Bet the bulls like March too
Comment from Ulla
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Absolutely, as we are here in Spain. I've lived here for a little over twenty years, and this is the longest and coldest winter during that time I live at the South Mediterranean and we are 15 F below normal. Are you in California?
I loved your poem. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
    Michigan
reply by Ulla on 02-Mar-2023
    Ah, thanks for letting me know.
Comment from kahpot
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AH, sunshine, I have been enjoying it for quite some time now!
QLD Australia though have seen (tv. news) of the cold in your neck of the woods? very well written, stay warm my friend****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    Thank you, kahpot
Comment from judiverse
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Not me! It was in the 60's where I live. Excellent rhyme, including some internal rhyme. Love the "weather deemed better." It's obvious March is playing favorites--punishing some, rewarding others. I'm not sure I'd recognize a lioness shrew. Fun poem. judi

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Judi.
reply by judiverse on 02-Mar-2023
    You're welcome. judi
Comment from BethShelby
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Well a beginning Shrew should turn into a lamb. I could handle that. The problem is here in Tennessee some smart alec decided we should have three more winters after the beginning of Spring. We have a dogwood winter and a blackberry winter and an Easter winter, and some times they are worse than January which forgot to be that cold here.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    I have family in Franklin, Lebanon, and Nashville.
reply by BethShelby on 01-Mar-2023
    Nashville get some really strong storms. It's an interesting place t visit though. I'm in Chattanooga.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, I don't know where you are, but I'm guessing it's either in the mountains out West, or in the North East. In Ohio it's 75 today and just broke the all time record hi. Keep warm!

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    I may be premature. Freezing rains earthquakes tomorrow.
Comment from susand3022
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I hear you loud and clear! I don't have to tell you why, because I just did! I will tell you that yesterday, there were 14 accidents on the highway in my neck of the woods between noon and 5pm. They closed the highway, my niece and her family were on the way home from RI, usually a 5 hour drive, and it took 8.
Crazy weather!
Susan :)

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    I?m waiting for the volcano in New Jersey
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for the weather report from your way, Bill. It's snow-covered here, too, but nothing as deep and cold as where you are. Hope Spring is on time this year!

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    It was snowing in April here last year.
reply by lyenochka on 01-Mar-2023
    We always joke about JUNuary here because of the cold summers...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, the March winds doth blow and we shall have snow. March is a funny month for weather and it can be harsh, a fine poem for March Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from royowen
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Yes, I feel for you, we are enjoying 75-80 deg sunny days here at the moment, but your turn will come, we'll be shivering, while you toasting, beautiful written Bill, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    Thanks, Roy
reply by royowen on 01-Mar-2023
    Welcome