Longing for Spring
A time of rebirth8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The glint of sunshine is always a pleasure as the earth appreciates the warmth, the light and the encouragement to wake up and enjoy life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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The glint of sunshine is always a pleasure as the earth appreciates the warmth, the light and the encouragement to wake up and enjoy life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you 😊
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 5-7-5 entry about nature. The text is a great size, and I like it being a color. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. Your last line is great with the personification for the sun. Your entire presentation is well done. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is a good 5-7-5 entry about nature. The text is a great size, and I like it being a color. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. Your last line is great with the personification for the sun. Your entire presentation is well done. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thankyou
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You are welcome.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a gorgeous poem and image. I like the dark brown background; it matches the image. Are we looking at spring or fall? The picture looks like a fall splendor; but you mentioned Mother earth awakes.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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What a gorgeous poem and image. I like the dark brown background; it matches the image. Are we looking at spring or fall? The picture looks like a fall splendor; but you mentioned Mother earth awakes.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I thought the same thing it is a spring picture thanks
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed the personification of each element of your poem and also the alliteration in the third line. The presentation is lovely and matches the words very well. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed the personification of each element of your poem and also the alliteration in the third line. The presentation is lovely and matches the words very well. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you Wendy 🙂
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
With so few words, you have created an uplifting and cheerful poem. Good job - spring is a time of new beginnings. Good luck with your work and thanks for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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With so few words, you have created an uplifting and cheerful poem. Good job - spring is a time of new beginnings. Good luck with your work and thanks for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thankyou so much
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful and great for me 575 contest. I do wish you the very best in the contest. I long for the day when spring arrives here and has been an unusually cold winter here.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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This is a wonderful and great for me 575 contest. I do wish you the very best in the contest. I long for the day when spring arrives here and has been an unusually cold winter here.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much yes won?t be long now 🙂
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Bravo in pints piece I enjoyed it very. Well.
Written.
everything went together. Keep up the good work you're very talented.
Once again I enjoy your peace.
Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Bravo in pints piece I enjoyed it very. Well.
Written.
everything went together. Keep up the good work you're very talented.
Once again I enjoy your peace.
Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A very well presented page. The picture and text marry very well. The natural colours are just those we associate with Spring. It is great to review a cheerful piece!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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A very well presented page. The picture and text marry very well. The natural colours are just those we associate with Spring. It is great to review a cheerful piece!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Best wishes!