Dribbles And Drabbles
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Campfire"A Collection Of Mini Stories
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Comment from country ranch writer
You don't have to be related by blood to be a father raising a son or sons, love caring and compassion is what they need and it hurts just the same when a loved one passes away,
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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You don't have to be related by blood to be a father raising a son or sons, love caring and compassion is what they need and it hurts just the same when a loved one passes away,
Comment Written 02-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Sankey
Short and sweet with new questions for Bob, ha. Thanks for sharing. I am looking forward to where this is going. I loved the beautiful picture, as well. Keep it coming. No spags.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Short and sweet with new questions for Bob, ha. Thanks for sharing. I am looking forward to where this is going. I loved the beautiful picture, as well. Keep it coming. No spags.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Always appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ooh. That could be taken two ways. Either biologically he isn't the son or the viewpoint is drastically different. Either way you wove a seemingly peaceful tale and ended with a cliffhanger. Great job. Less is sometimes more. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Ooh. That could be taken two ways. Either biologically he isn't the son or the viewpoint is drastically different. Either way you wove a seemingly peaceful tale and ended with a cliffhanger. Great job. Less is sometimes more. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from eliz100
WOW! What a surprise ending. I thought you would go straight and you veered off the trail. Good job! I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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WOW! What a surprise ending. I thought you would go straight and you veered off the trail. Good job! I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Bob discovered he was not his father's son. (Ouch!!! Now was he adopted? I'm sorry but I need more information. It's not fair that you leave us hanging like this. LOL)
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You have most of the elements required for a story, well actually, all of them, but I want more. LOL Good luck with the contest. This is a very good write.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Bob discovered he was not his father's son. (Ouch!!! Now was he adopted? I'm sorry but I need more information. It's not fair that you leave us hanging like this. LOL)
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You have most of the elements required for a story, well actually, all of them, but I want more. LOL Good luck with the contest. This is a very good write.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, you are posting more this week than any time I can remember, and these flash pieces all end with a major pop. I just wish I'd known they were all coming and I was out of stars. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Wow, you are posting more this week than any time I can remember, and these flash pieces all end with a major pop. I just wish I'd known they were all coming and I was out of stars. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Burning through some story ideas I have collected over time that have decided not to use for anything else, so might as well make them Flash pieces. Always appreciate you, your comments, and your reviews.
Comment from Ulla
Well, Brett, as family secrets go, this must be a little bombshell to Bob's life. You leave us wondering what his reaction would be. A great flash for your book. All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Well, Brett, as family secrets go, this must be a little bombshell to Bob's life. You leave us wondering what his reaction would be. A great flash for your book. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
That would be a shocker if passing on family traditions was an important part of a family tradition. It might really shake the teminally ill grandfather. In time the initial shock of learning that might last a while, but If you'rer raising a son not being the biological father would be outwayed by the love and pride you feel for a son who doesn't share your DNA. Nice flash.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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That would be a shocker if passing on family traditions was an important part of a family tradition. It might really shake the teminally ill grandfather. In time the initial shock of learning that might last a while, but If you'rer raising a son not being the biological father would be outwayed by the love and pride you feel for a son who doesn't share your DNA. Nice flash.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a great suspenseful flash fiction story. It left the cliffhanger at the end where it was supposed to be and did it in a very brief story.
This is well written and tells the tale in a well-done style of descriptive words that speak out to all the fathers and sons who learn who they really are at the last minute.
Jesse
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is a great suspenseful flash fiction story. It left the cliffhanger at the end where it was supposed to be and did it in a very brief story.
This is well written and tells the tale in a well-done style of descriptive words that speak out to all the fathers and sons who learn who they really are at the last minute.
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.