My Name
My Name4 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good name acrostic entry. The text is an okay size, but if your first letters were made a different color your vertical name would standout. It would make your name easily seen.
Your message is clearly stated in most places, but some areas I am unsure who the mystery person mentioned in your piece. The reference takes away some of the clarity of your poem. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is a good name acrostic entry. The text is an okay size, but if your first letters were made a different color your vertical name would standout. It would make your name easily seen.
Your message is clearly stated in most places, but some areas I am unsure who the mystery person mentioned in your piece. The reference takes away some of the clarity of your poem. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you! I took your advice and bolded the letters of my name. Thank you again for your feedback! ❤️
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You are welcome.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Did you forget the "h" in your name? Writing these kinds of poems is a good thing. I like your poem. It spells out the meaning of your name. You have to love yourself before you can love others.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Did you forget the "h" in your name? Writing these kinds of poems is a good thing. I like your poem. It spells out the meaning of your name. You have to love yourself before you can love others.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you!!! ❤️
Comment from Kaiku
cute. I do not know R.L. Stine and never read Goosebumps. With the ending you provided I was think the good Dr. Seuss. I couldn`t even figure out your name unless it`s Carlie Beth. I am not the sharpest tool in the shed.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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cute. I do not know R.L. Stine and never read Goosebumps. With the ending you provided I was think the good Dr. Seuss. I couldn`t even figure out your name unless it`s Carlie Beth. I am not the sharpest tool in the shed.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your feedback!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this simple joy in a name here as when we hear our own name called by someone who loves us, it has a whole different meaning. Loved the sentiments in your clever acrostic, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed this simple joy in a name here as when we hear our own name called by someone who loves us, it has a whole different meaning. Loved the sentiments in your clever acrostic, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!!! ❤️❤️
