Comment from Julie G1

Excellent

So well done. We all have free thought anxiety. The poet's choice of language was apt and evocative. The rhyming was effective, added to the general word picture. Keep on writing.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023

Thanks Julie for the review and comments.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, thank you for sharing post with us. Yes, there is plenty of evil in the world.

Tares Deeply into the Heart. (Tears???)

Are you ready Again? (not sure but wonder if there shouldn't be a comma after 'ready')

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023

Thanks Barbara.
I did catch that afterwards when I reviewed it with the grammar issue.
Ricky

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I don't think we were ever really meant to suffer, the scene set in Eden, was the idyllic life, surrounded by beauty, tending the garden, walking with Godbin the quiet of the evening, but separation happened. Beautifully written Ricky, blessings Roy
Typo (Tares) deeply into the heart. Tears?

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023

Thanks Roy. I did catch that grammar issue when I went to review it earlier.
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 01-Mar-2023

Well done