Taste of My Reality
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2 total reviews
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Great job. Screenshot no miss fire.
Intriguing thrilling.
Studying captivating.
In a little scary.
Keep up the good work Bravo. Can we take a motor for me
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Great job. Screenshot no miss fire.
Intriguing thrilling.
Studying captivating.
In a little scary.
Keep up the good work Bravo. Can we take a motor for me
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Fear sometimes can be something that will push us to the edge, but if we are pushed to far?
And, over, the edge.
we are finished.
Thanks again and enjoy your evening.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, evil and fear are a reality. Thank you for sharing.
Ssometime with no care? (one 's' is sufficient on 'Sometimes)
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Now look intently at an into its Stare! (doesn't make sense, something needs to be corrected)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Yes, evil and fear are a reality. Thank you for sharing.
Ssometime with no care? (one 's' is sufficient on 'Sometimes)
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Now look intently at an into its Stare! (doesn't make sense, something needs to be corrected)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks again for reviewing and correcting my work.
I added a little bit more to it also to describe fear.
Doctor Ricky