Impatience
Can not wait for dinner.4 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the Collom Lune contest. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. In Germany lots of folks love tartar. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the Collom Lune contest. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. In Germany lots of folks love tartar. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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I am mostly German, but have a bit of everything in me. Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent for the Collom Lune Contest. That sounds gross. Raw meat doesn't seem appealing.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Excellent for the Collom Lune Contest. That sounds gross. Raw meat doesn't seem appealing.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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How true, thanks for your review.
Comment from w.j.debi
Okay, I'm hungry. I love my mother's meatloaf and your poem makes me want to go mix one up. I love the feeling of mixing the ingredients with my fingers too. It must be time to go fix dinner.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Okay, I'm hungry. I love my mother's meatloaf and your poem makes me want to go mix one up. I love the feeling of mixing the ingredients with my fingers too. It must be time to go fix dinner.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the colorful review.
Comment from Sally Law
Well I am certainly a meat lover and can appreciate this one. I do like my baked though. To each his own.
A delightful read in this new form, mystery poet.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Well I am certainly a meat lover and can appreciate this one. I do like my baked though. To each his own.
A delightful read in this new form, mystery poet.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much. Good wishes to you too.
