Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Night Lights"Musing of an old man
28 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
Thirds two line stanzas show how nature works to make the night as tuneful as possible the day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
.Good luck with the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Hi,
Thirds two line stanzas show how nature works to make the night as tuneful as possible the day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
.Good luck with the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Joan, my thanks and be well!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. I found the poem
interesting to read. I pondered on the second stanza and how the sunlight
strikes on the Moon's surface as the author states. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes well with this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. I found the poem
interesting to read. I pondered on the second stanza and how the sunlight
strikes on the Moon's surface as the author states. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes well with this poem.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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I am glad the poem made you relfect on the nature of moonlight.
Comment from June Sargent
A lovely Collum lune that highlights two perfowctibes on a moonlit night. Well chosen words accompanied by the perfect artwork. I enjoyed the read. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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A lovely Collum lune that highlights two perfowctibes on a moonlit night. Well chosen words accompanied by the perfect artwork. I enjoyed the read. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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June, thank you. I value your motivational words.
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That mangled word is perspectives - lol
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Ahh! I tried to, unscramlbe it,
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem it is presented nicely. Nice choice of font and background Color as well . Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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This is a beautifully written poem it is presented nicely. Nice choice of font and background Color as well . Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Joanne, thank you for your kind words of support.
Comment from Brandon Clark
Exquisitely written and your overall presentation was great. By this I mean: the font size and style were great and the image and background color all coordinated nicely. Also, your word choice was very good and made the poem a pleasure to read. I see no way to improve this!
Great Job! Best of luck to you for the contest!
Brandon
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Exquisitely written and your overall presentation was great. By this I mean: the font size and style were great and the image and background color all coordinated nicely. Also, your word choice was very good and made the poem a pleasure to read. I see no way to improve this!
Great Job! Best of luck to you for the contest!
Brandon
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Brandon, I am very grateful for you validation of this work.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Congratulations on trying successfully a new style of poetry! You have done a fine job of writing what it means to lighten the night with the slivery moon and stars. The picture is magnificent and is chosen well for this poem.
Thanks for sharing this new style and for showing us in your author's notes how it is supposed to be done.
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Congratulations on trying successfully a new style of poetry! You have done a fine job of writing what it means to lighten the night with the slivery moon and stars. The picture is magnificent and is chosen well for this poem.
Thanks for sharing this new style and for showing us in your author's notes how it is supposed to be done.
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Jesse, thanks. I admit I found this more challedning that I thought it would be.
Comment from Terry Broxson
I have never heard of a Lune poem. I didn't know there were Kelly and Collom forms. I don't know how you poets keep up with all the different forms of poetry. But I do like the imagery, and your ability to paint a picture is outstanding. Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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I have never heard of a Lune poem. I didn't know there were Kelly and Collom forms. I don't know how you poets keep up with all the different forms of poetry. But I do like the imagery, and your ability to paint a picture is outstanding. Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Terry, thanks ! I must admit I find these new styles a bit cheeky.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the poems.
-Effective nature imagery describing
the moonlight and the nightingale.
-I like the contrast with the moon and sun.
-You create a good word picture of each scene.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the poems.
-Effective nature imagery describing
the moonlight and the nightingale.
-I like the contrast with the moon and sun.
-You create a good word picture of each scene.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks much, Pam, I trust all is going great in our world!
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You are welcome. It is going pretty well and can't complain too much😊 Hope things are good with you, too.
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Just typical old age challenges, likegetting a pacer maker onboarded in a few days...
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That does not sound like fun. Hope everything goes okay, and it makes a difference in your life. Compared to that I am doing great! Take care and be well.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I loved this short, witty evocative poem about a nightingale bird flying at night with the moonlight reflecting off his wings as he flies through the night
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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I loved this short, witty evocative poem about a nightingale bird flying at night with the moonlight reflecting off his wings as he flies through the night
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Sir!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'm not familiar with this style of poetry. I liked the imagery. Almost like postitive/negative images. The moonlight had it imagery and the sunlight had its own imagery. Sort of like poetic yen and ��. Very beautiful poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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I'm not familiar with this style of poetry. I liked the imagery. Almost like postitive/negative images. The moonlight had it imagery and the sunlight had its own imagery. Sort of like poetic yen and ��. Very beautiful poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Gretchen, thank you,
