Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Love Matters"Musing of an old man
25 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent alliteration body count poem. You have covered the alphabet perfectly and beautifully. Perfect word to begin and end your poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Excellent alliteration body count poem. You have covered the alphabet perfectly and beautifully. Perfect word to begin and end your poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks, it was quite the challenge, 🎶
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love these different ways to write an acrostic. Yours is fabulous. And that is love! You've chosen some brilliant words to use for this entry, they lead you right down to page to that final, amazing word, LOVE! Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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I love these different ways to write an acrostic. Yours is fabulous. And that is love! You've chosen some brilliant words to use for this entry, they lead you right down to page to that final, amazing word, LOVE! Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Sandra, I believe life would be so much more pure if we could just approach everyday and everyone with love or at minimum loving neutrality. 🙏
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are vibrant, descriptive and creative. I liked how this
author intensely states throughout this poem until the end "Love Matters" The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the theme
and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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The author's words are vibrant, descriptive and creative. I liked how this
author intensely states throughout this poem until the end "Love Matters" The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the theme
and words of this poem.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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harmony, your kind words are valued, thank you!
Comment from jmdg1954
I found your poem to be interesting. This style of poetry seems to be a mish mash of words sometimes strewn together, alphabetically.
I think each word or coupled words wii have a tendency for the reader to think of love and their partner.
John
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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I found your poem to be interesting. This style of poetry seems to be a mish mash of words sometimes strewn together, alphabetically.
I think each word or coupled words wii have a tendency for the reader to think of love and their partner.
John
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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John thanks!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This thrills my soul and heart to a tee. I love the line handsomely intoxicated it goes so well with the feeling of love and sensual intoxication with the ABC poetry. This is well done!
Have a wonderful Wednesday!
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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This thrills my soul and heart to a tee. I love the line handsomely intoxicated it goes so well with the feeling of love and sensual intoxication with the ABC poetry. This is well done!
Have a wonderful Wednesday!
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Jesse, may you day filled with much Joy!
Comment from SimianSavant
Nicely done. This should do well in the contest. I liked that you started in the middle of the alphabet. It's stretching a little in X-Z, though that is hard to get around. Yet your choice of artwork pairs so excellently with the choice of words that it gives it some meaning. Thank you for a thoughtful, well crafted entry.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Nicely done. This should do well in the contest. I liked that you started in the middle of the alphabet. It's stretching a little in X-Z, though that is hard to get around. Yet your choice of artwork pairs so excellently with the choice of words that it gives it some meaning. Thank you for a thoughtful, well crafted entry.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the nice comments and the contest,
Comment from Laurie Holding
I find this format fascinating, and you've mastered it! I'd change the font for the contest if I were you, but that's just my opinion. Script gets tough to read. You've inspired me, though, to try my hand at the ABC. Thank you for posting, and I wish you luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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I find this format fascinating, and you've mastered it! I'd change the font for the contest if I were you, but that's just my opinion. Script gets tough to read. You've inspired me, though, to try my hand at the ABC. Thank you for posting, and I wish you luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Laurie, thank you a very good suggestion.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I love the artwork, and the successful attempt at alliterating but I also got lost along the way, now and then, as I myself, and perhaps no one else
understand all you have written. No ill intent intended.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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I love the artwork, and the successful attempt at alliterating but I also got lost along the way, now and then, as I myself, and perhaps no one else
understand all you have written. No ill intent intended.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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No harm, no fowl!
Comment from Kaiku
What is `xing ye`? I guess I could google it. The artwork is very cool. Would love to have that in 3D made of some combination of materials like glass, wood and maybe stone if possible. Good luck
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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What is `xing ye`? I guess I could google it. The artwork is very cool. Would love to have that in 3D made of some combination of materials like glass, wood and maybe stone if possible. Good luck
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Hello friend:
To zing: zing
/ziNG/
noun
energy, enthusiasm, or liveliness.
"he was expected to add some zing to the lackluster team"
ye: /yē/
pronounARCHAIC?DIALECT
plural form of thou1.
"gather ye rosebuds, while ye may
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Your spelling was xing. Ye would have made since with zing. Might want to check that. I could be mistaken.
Comment from Boogienights
What a terrific poem that accurately describes the feelings of love.you do so in a really fun way, it caught and held my attention, and you went really far in the alphabet. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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What a terrific poem that accurately describes the feelings of love.you do so in a really fun way, it caught and held my attention, and you went really far in the alphabet. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you, I am so pleased you found this enjoyable.Thanks, also for the good wishes.
