Taste of My Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Walking Along the Edge of Realit"The Pathway to Pain and Misery
5 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece makes me feel lost and separated from the world around me. It is like I am looking through a window, trying to reach out and call those on the other side, only to be invisible.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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This piece makes me feel lost and separated from the world around me. It is like I am looking through a window, trying to reach out and call those on the other side, only to be invisible.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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I thank you for this interpretation and yes it is quite accurate of the way I'm feeling.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this slice of reality with us. I am pretty sure hate and revenge are not positive emotions. They usually cause a downfall of a human. I do hope these are only for the purpose of the poem.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you for sharing this slice of reality with us. I am pretty sure hate and revenge are not positive emotions. They usually cause a downfall of a human. I do hope these are only for the purpose of the poem.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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There will be more on the hate subject, probably tomorrow.
Thanks and as always,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from papa55mike
I think we all walk the edge of reality every day. It's the Lord who guides carefully along. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I think we all walk the edge of reality every day. It's the Lord who guides carefully along. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thanks Mike and I agree.
God protects and watches over.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Julcia
I had to reread your poem to catch
every statement in the poem as the
use of so many capitals distracted
me from its raw, angry tone.
The person in the poem has feelin gs of hate and revenge. These
are trigger words for a person in an
overwhelming crisis. It may be helpful for him to focus in more
positive areas of strenghts: writing
them in a list could help. Also, list
your support system. Get in touch
with a person you trust. I felt your
pathos and raw pain. No one need to live with all that. Feel free to ignore any or all of my suggestions.
Lots of better days to you, friend.
Julcia
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I had to reread your poem to catch
every statement in the poem as the
use of so many capitals distracted
me from its raw, angry tone.
The person in the poem has feelin gs of hate and revenge. These
are trigger words for a person in an
overwhelming crisis. It may be helpful for him to focus in more
positive areas of strenghts: writing
them in a list could help. Also, list
your support system. Get in touch
with a person you trust. I felt your
pathos and raw pain. No one need to live with all that. Feel free to ignore any or all of my suggestions.
Lots of better days to you, friend.
Julcia
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Why thank you for stopping by.
Doctor Ricky
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I did not mean to do anything except to
assist a person who is overwhelmed, perhaps. Best of luck.
Julcia
Comment from Lea Tonin1
And you really know how to put the nail on the head don't you and you are obviously retarded for writing is plain to say anyone who can't see that needs glasses. I certainly hope you have a book of poems or are planning on because you certainly have really good material how to fill out a book nicely. This poem strikes a chord with me as it should any person who has a heart. The harshness of life is a reality and those who are starving and losing their homes I know what that is like I have been there. And so my heart pulls out to anyone who will find themselves in this situation and of course if I find myself in a place to help I will. Congratulations on another beautiful poem beautiful and sad at the same time. Message loud and clear.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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And you really know how to put the nail on the head don't you and you are obviously retarded for writing is plain to say anyone who can't see that needs glasses. I certainly hope you have a book of poems or are planning on because you certainly have really good material how to fill out a book nicely. This poem strikes a chord with me as it should any person who has a heart. The harshness of life is a reality and those who are starving and losing their homes I know what that is like I have been there. And so my heart pulls out to anyone who will find themselves in this situation and of course if I find myself in a place to help I will. Congratulations on another beautiful poem beautiful and sad at the same time. Message loud and clear.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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You will notice my dear that it's always deep.
You'll notice my dear that it's always lengthy.
And you will notice my dear. It's always directly on target.
Why?
You'll soon see!
Thanks and as always,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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OK I shall keep on reading
