A Poetic Pause
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Why...."First Poems
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Comment from thoughtgame2
I find this to be one of the greatest poems ever written. I also love the connection made between the owl and the message. Not often have I read so many beautiful pages from ones portfolio.to Be honest you are my first. Thank you for reminding me that Someone somewhere always needs it> have a great life young lady and keep it coming>>>>smile>
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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I find this to be one of the greatest poems ever written. I also love the connection made between the owl and the message. Not often have I read so many beautiful pages from ones portfolio.to Be honest you are my first. Thank you for reminding me that Someone somewhere always needs it> have a great life young lady and keep it coming>>>>smile>
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. Wow, I appreciate you reading that. Yeah, I think there should be no fear when we think of God because that's not something he would want, I'm sure of it.
The evil and the mayhem that people spread in this world really has to go. Thank you very much again. I appreciate your kind words. I'm so glad you like it. Make your day be awesome!
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Comment from karenina
This will rattle a few trees I think. Still, you have a sound foundation of morality. You outline that in your author's notes. (In this case, I found your notes to be a rich addition to your already descriptive poem!)
One question: In this line-- "Were supposed to err to perfect our souls."
Did you mean to type "we're?" As in We are?
(It seems so)
A million different religions and tenets and beliefs... In the end, there is evil and there is good.
We must try. Then try harder. And trust...
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This will rattle a few trees I think. Still, you have a sound foundation of morality. You outline that in your author's notes. (In this case, I found your notes to be a rich addition to your already descriptive poem!)
One question: In this line-- "Were supposed to err to perfect our souls."
Did you mean to type "we're?" As in We are?
(It seems so)
A million different religions and tenets and beliefs... In the end, there is evil and there is good.
We must try. Then try harder. And trust...
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Yes we are you are exactly right you're really good at this reviewing stuff you know. I'm always interested in your ideas there are very beneficial thank you!
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Thanks for that. I'm not sure how good I am...but I do care...and if I can offer a word or two to encourage, I'm thrilled.
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You have been very helpful today and instrumental in making sure. I'm on the money for regulations and stuff and then you point it out where things. Would? Look better. When you pointed out things that you like you've been very measured and compassionate and helpful it is a gift you have. I think so thank you for all your responses and we will be chatting again have a great night!🙃😁😉🙂
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You as well! I'll be turning in soon....(How did it get to be 2:32 AM!?)
I'll check in with you tomorrow!
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Rest well!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We talk of God fearing people, but should we fear God like this. The answer is no and as you say, we should be feeling love and joy in our hearts. How times have changed and attitudes are changing too. A poignant write Lea, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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We talk of God fearing people, but should we fear God like this. The answer is no and as you say, we should be feeling love and joy in our hearts. How times have changed and attitudes are changing too. A poignant write Lea, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Yeah I just thought I'd throw that out there for some healthfire and brimstone people and 1 of them decided to engage me the other night.
Comment from mermaids
You have a strong steady beat in your words. I like the line "discard false ideas, they're flotsam and spam". It is a delicious use of words that makes the reader think. Excellent poem for today's world.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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You have a strong steady beat in your words. I like the line "discard false ideas, they're flotsam and spam". It is a delicious use of words that makes the reader think. Excellent poem for today's world.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much I'm glad you like it to a little bit controversial but that's OK that's what I am lol thank you so much again have a great day!!
