Flickering
A bright future and an illuminated past.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The flickering flame of life is every present and only when the flame goes out is it all over, Here the flame is alive and kicking throughout this well worded poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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The flickering flame of life is every present and only when the flame goes out is it all over, Here the flame is alive and kicking throughout this well worded poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from victor 66
I like the words in your poem because they follow a sense of rhythm and yet they also make sense. I'm going to try to write one myself in this format but I don't think it'll be as good as yours. Good luck in the contest.
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I like the words in your poem because they follow a sense of rhythm and yet they also make sense. I'm going to try to write one myself in this format but I don't think it'll be as good as yours. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
