Comment from victor 66

Excellent

Your poem follows a certain sense of rhythm and I like the way it also makes sense to me. The thing about falling in love and it ending, is that at least you tried. I don't know what people do who haven't tried or who haven't loved. I feel sorry for them. I applauded those of us who have lost someone. I have lost twice but I found a third love that I'm quite happy with. Maybe "thirds" the charm. Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023

Thank you very much. I like the challenges of writing in these formats. I try to make a few words make reasonable sense.

reply by victor 66 on 28-Feb-2023

You?re most welcome.

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023

Thank you so very much.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I am undecided if I want to search for love or just give up again. Maybe it's as you say, and I am unconsciously seeking. I think you did a great job describing that. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023

Thank you so much. I like to write short poems in these formats. I try to make sense with a few words.

Always be hopeful of love!