Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Such a wonderful ending to a very trying situation. Your prayers were answered for sure. From that day forward, hopefully things went well for you. I'm sure there were many trails that had to be unraveled.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Such a wonderful ending to a very trying situation. Your prayers were answered for sure. From that day forward, hopefully things went well for you. I'm sure there were many trails that had to be unraveled.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Several. Appreciate the review and your comments.
Comment from Kohan Killetz
This is genuinely good. I was invested in your story, and the characters came off the page. It must be hard to remember fully what must have happened a long while ago. I am also impressed by how you made yourself the "unwanted dog". It must have been a tough thing to live through.
I award 5 stars only to those works that meet the promise of their premise. Yours did that for me.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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This is genuinely good. I was invested in your story, and the characters came off the page. It must be hard to remember fully what must have happened a long while ago. I am also impressed by how you made yourself the "unwanted dog". It must have been a tough thing to live through.
I award 5 stars only to those works that meet the promise of their premise. Yours did that for me.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
I had to go back and re-read the last chapter, I had forgotten where you had left off. I'm glad that you finally got around to publishing this. Is this the end or is there more to come? Well done buddy. I wish all the boys in all the homes like Heritage could find a hero to rescue them. Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Hello Brett,
I had to go back and re-read the last chapter, I had forgotten where you had left off. I'm glad that you finally got around to publishing this. Is this the end or is there more to come? Well done buddy. I wish all the boys in all the homes like Heritage could find a hero to rescue them. Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ricky1024
I remember reading a couple of these about a year ago.
I recall something about you got away on your own and was thirsty and got caught. Trying to steal a Pepsi and a man paid for it.
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This one was well written and it shows the pain of being an orphan punishment involved sometimes by the cruel people who run everything.
Writing these kind of things help change problems in the system.
I applaud you.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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I remember reading a couple of these about a year ago.
I recall something about you got away on your own and was thirsty and got caught. Trying to steal a Pepsi and a man paid for it.
...
This one was well written and it shows the pain of being an orphan punishment involved sometimes by the cruel people who run everything.
Writing these kind of things help change problems in the system.
I applaud you.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is the first chapter I've read in your biography, Brett. What a remarkable chapter. I'll have to catch up. I seems you were unwanted but I don't know yet whether that was by your parents or foster parents. But the excitement you've shown so brilliantly of your possible future with Rodney. I hope it works out. I'll make sure I don't miss any more. You've certainly hooked me into your story. Well done! :)) Sandra x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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This is the first chapter I've read in your biography, Brett. What a remarkable chapter. I'll have to catch up. I seems you were unwanted but I don't know yet whether that was by your parents or foster parents. But the excitement you've shown so brilliantly of your possible future with Rodney. I hope it works out. I'll make sure I don't miss any more. You've certainly hooked me into your story. Well done! :)) Sandra x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Brett,
Wow.
Just wow.
What a moving, well-developed biographical offering.
Characters and setting well-developed.
Dialogue is realistic.
But it the emotional ending that hit this reader..."The Unwanted Dog was going home."
Thank you for sharing...
diane
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Good morning, Brett,
Wow.
Just wow.
What a moving, well-developed biographical offering.
Characters and setting well-developed.
Dialogue is realistic.
But it the emotional ending that hit this reader..."The Unwanted Dog was going home."
Thank you for sharing...
diane
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Wendy G
Your moving writing and honesty brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for continuing your autobiography. I am so glad that a new chapter is about to open up for you, after all you had been through at that evil place and with those evil and hypocritical people.
Wendy.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Your moving writing and honesty brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for continuing your autobiography. I am so glad that a new chapter is about to open up for you, after all you had been through at that evil place and with those evil and hypocritical people.
Wendy.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
That had to be a happy day for you. It made me happy just reading it. You did a great job, and I didn't see any errors. Have a wonderful Sunday after-noon and evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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That had to be a happy day for you. It made me happy just reading it. You did a great job, and I didn't see any errors. Have a wonderful Sunday after-noon and evening. Shirley
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm a true sucker for happy endings, even if it's just one chapter at a time, and the next chapter might take us back to more difficult times. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Glad to have you back!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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I'm a true sucker for happy endings, even if it's just one chapter at a time, and the next chapter might take us back to more difficult times. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Glad to have you back!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thanks. Your comments and reviews most welcomed.
Comment from Sankey
Yay! Finally, a new beginning for you! What a great chapter. Is your adopted Dad still living? Will there be more to this? Can't wait, if so. God Bless you, mate. Good to see you back! No spags.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Yay! Finally, a new beginning for you! What a great chapter. Is your adopted Dad still living? Will there be more to this? Can't wait, if so. God Bless you, mate. Good to see you back! No spags.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Always appreciate your comments and reviews.