Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Candlestick"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Jay Squires
This is where your zaniness excels -- in small rushes of narrative in which the unexpected happens, as in flash fiction. Ending with such gems as: "I am, of course, innocent. It was only a game." Sure it was ....
Jay
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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This is where your zaniness excels -- in small rushes of narrative in which the unexpected happens, as in flash fiction. Ending with such gems as: "I am, of course, innocent. It was only a game." Sure it was ....
Jay
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Jay.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You know those stinking police, always jumping to conclusion. LOL. When the police (finally) arrived, every one had disposed of those weapons and dressed up like the cast of "Cats". Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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You know those stinking police, always jumping to conclusion. LOL. When the police (finally) arrived, every one had disposed of those weapons and dressed up like the cast of "Cats". Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Ric
Comment from John Ciarmello
Ha! You have an interesting mind, Bill. I'm always intrigued to click on your posts because I know that piece will take me to a different place in my muse. A place that is other than the typical. Great stuff! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Ha! You have an interesting mind, Bill. I'm always intrigued to click on your posts because I know that piece will take me to a different place in my muse. A place that is other than the typical. Great stuff! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you, John. I feel bad that you say such kind things about my postings, but I rarely dive into longer, chapter-stories like yours. I am going to change that now and read this latest posting that you were looking for last minute comments on before sending it off to the binders. I will do that now and comment where appropriate.
Comment from nomi338
True it was just a game. You were arrested however because of what you were trying to do to Mrs. White with the candle stick. You were being a very naughty boy. No one believes that she invited you to do that. They all think you were lying on that poor dear woman. Shame on you.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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True it was just a game. You were arrested however because of what you were trying to do to Mrs. White with the candle stick. You were being a very naughty boy. No one believes that she invited you to do that. They all think you were lying on that poor dear woman. Shame on you.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Milton Bradley made me do it.
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Of course.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Yes, and I know that game of "Clue" but the police could not have been called for the game. What else was going on? Apparently, the soloist singing "Memory" forced the neighbors to call the police for murdering the song...
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Lol! Yes, and I know that game of "Clue" but the police could not have been called for the game. What else was going on? Apparently, the soloist singing "Memory" forced the neighbors to call the police for murdering the song...
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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The butler did it.
