Rain Tableau
The sound of rain19 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This kind of persistent rain has a tendency to send me to sleep and you created an atmospheric write here and I enjoyed your presentation of words increasing in size as the rain is getting louder, magical, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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This kind of persistent rain has a tendency to send me to sleep and you created an atmospheric write here and I enjoyed your presentation of words increasing in size as the rain is getting louder, magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from kahpot
Love the building of the font as we read the mighty roar of the rain, this is a wonderful poem, with your words providing an excellent image, very well written and presented, ****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Love the building of the font as we read the mighty roar of the rain, this is a wonderful poem, with your words providing an excellent image, very well written and presented, ****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Jessica.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and topic.
-You have a very good progression describing
the rain, and the font sizes are done well.
-I like your creative approach and
excellent descriptive words as the rain
gradually gets more intense.
-A very good concluding line.
-I saw where you got second place in the contest.
-Congratulations on that!!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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-Nice image and presentation, Jessica.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and topic.
-You have a very good progression describing
the rain, and the font sizes are done well.
-I like your creative approach and
excellent descriptive words as the rain
gradually gets more intense.
-A very good concluding line.
-I saw where you got second place in the contest.
-Congratulations on that!!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Pam, THANK YOU for making me aware of this oversight- in the process of fixing it now. Very much appreciated! <3
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Fixed (Phew) can?t thank you enough
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You are very welcome. I changed the review, and I am glad you did well in the contest!
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You are welcome, Jessica.
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You are so kind, thank you very much!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written tableau poem.beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. A nice overall presentation.well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This is a nicely written tableau poem.beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. A nice overall presentation.well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much :)
Comment from Jim Wile
You did a wonderful job with this tableau poem. I loved the way you built it to a crescendo with your words (pattering, trickling, pouring and finally roaring) and slowly increasing font size. That was very well done.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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You did a wonderful job with this tableau poem. I loved the way you built it to a crescendo with your words (pattering, trickling, pouring and finally roaring) and slowly increasing font size. That was very well done.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much, Jim!
Comment from Bill Schott
This tableau poem, Rain, has the required formatting and brings the weather to our window where we can appreciate its severity while enjoying our safety.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This tableau poem, Rain, has the required formatting and brings the weather to our window where we can appreciate its severity while enjoying our safety.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I appreciate your comment, thank you!
Comment from Sarah Tummey
The first and second lines seem to have 5 beats between them, rather than 5 beats each. What about "Looking up, I wait > Till I hear the sound", or something like that.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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The first and second lines seem to have 5 beats between them, rather than 5 beats each. What about "Looking up, I wait > Till I hear the sound", or something like that.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thanks for your feedback!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a well-stated Tableau poetry contest entry. The text is a great size, and the message is basically stated clearly except line two. On line #2 if the word "the" was placed before window that line would be clearer. Your message paints a picture of a progressing dreary rainy day.
The photo fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This is a well-stated Tableau poetry contest entry. The text is a great size, and the message is basically stated clearly except line two. On line #2 if the word "the" was placed before window that line would be clearer. Your message paints a picture of a progressing dreary rainy day.
The photo fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Sandra! I appreciate your feedback very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Kaiku
very good. the method of using the font to coincide with the heaviness of rainfall was very creative and played well with your words. Good luck in the writing prompt. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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very good. the method of using the font to coincide with the heaviness of rainfall was very creative and played well with your words. Good luck in the writing prompt. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Wendy G
I like the increasing sizeof the font to represent the increasing volume of the rain. Your image is lovely and presentation excellent. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I like the increasing sizeof the font to represent the increasing volume of the rain. Your image is lovely and presentation excellent. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I appreciate that so much, thank you!
